no affence, but this story sounds like a rewrite of the movie... just with new characters...:/

Hmm a very interesting turn of events. Nice chapter, I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next :)

Wow! What an action-packed chapter!
I think this is one of the best things you've ever written so far! :D

Moaboa

I know! I almost cry every time I watch the flashback scenes...

Poor Lance! Maybe him and Jim could have daddy angst together... And I wanted to tell you that I had a dream last night about YOUR story, because I was reading it right before bed, and I dreamt that Jim's dad was Lance's dad, too! It was weird, but...

"OHHHHHH! We're off to find a place to hide. A place to hide! We're off to find a place to hide from the pirates!

New favorite song.

It's soooo good! One critique: I know it was mutiny on the ship and everything, and that they were kinda evil, I think it's a little harsh that Jim smirked as he watched aliens fall to their death.

I love it, it's fantastic! Just a question. If they didn't open the treasure map yet, how do they know which planet to land on?

I KNEW THAT SILVER HAD SAVED LANCE DURING THE STORM! IKNEWITIKNEWITIKNEWIT!

It's great! But two questions:

1. Is the big, stone-like alien Mr. Arrow? Because if this is a year after treasure planet, then... He should be dead.

2. Ummmm... Kinda awkward, but... This isn't going to be slash, is it?

So that's all it took to open the map? :D To say the truth, I would have tried doing this firstly if I were Jim :D Good chapter :)

yay somethin thats NOT boring jim/oc romance. i dont see whats so great about romance when theirs adventure awaitin. plz update all ur fics soon c:.

Hahaha!

Yes, Jim! Just glare at it and it shall open for you. XD

I also liked the bit when Jim made fun of Silver's accent. I can totally see it. Oh but I don't think Silver's accent is a "pirate accent" per say. I believe his accent is Irish mixed in with pirate vocabulary. But maybe I'm wrong. -shrugs-

Although this is short -glares- I'm glad you posted a new chapter that had a wee bit of father/son fluff, so I'm happy. :) Not that romance is bad but I'm getting sad that there is hardly any new Silver and Jim fics anymore. The good side to that knowledge is that it's been making me work on my own Silver and Jim centered fanfics. ;D

Keep doing well in school, sweetie! But whenever you are not too busy and can actually write and post a new chapter, please update as soon as possible. God willing of course!

God bless!

Eeeeeep! I'm sorry I didn't review sooner. I've had this lazy reviewing streak going on but now I am fighting it because once I review a story, I stay loyal till the very end!

Anyway...I'm seeing improvement, so we shall celebrate! -party- And now we're beginning to see Lance starting to care, which is nice. :) I am curious to know what's gotten him so determined to please this mysterious fellow, which is why I tell you to update! I really miss the Silver and Jim father/son fluff though. :( But I'm sure there is more to come. :B

I do have one little critique though...I'm a little surprised that Jim opened up to Lance so quickly. I don't think it's in Jim's character to let someone he doesn't really trust to see such a vulnerable side of him but I'm fully aware there is a reason for it in your fic. But other than that, I think it went well.

Now I'm off to read and review the next chapter!
God bless, hun!

I read all the chapters up until here, and I think the story line is OK, but the original character's personalitys were very off, and I had a hard time picturing the story in my mind, I also didn't like the fighting between Jim and Silver. It ruined the whole thing. Well work on your editing and keep on writing stories.
Good luck!