Liked this very much!

Ahhh this was so lovely. The last bits were hilarious, a definite joy to read. Thanks for writing this.

...reviewing here cause my review on AO3 timed out I think, so if you get two exact reviews, oops.

I really enjoyed reading this. I like Amber's character. I'd be afraid of any children that Sherlock and Amber had, though.

I am so happy I subscribed here too, since AO3 is having issues. Tension! And Sherlock play acting is always a source of great amusement. Can't wait for more.

Fanatstic update, really enjoying the story. Nice to see John and Sherlock respectively 'in disguise' so to speak and their different approaches. Love their interaction and how intricate the plot is.

Alright, let me just say here - you are a brilliant writer. Ok. Off to the next chapter.

So good to see an update on this! The characterisations are fantastic - Sherlock with the planner, John's reflections on Soo Lin - and the plot is excellent. Very much enjoying!

Oh, I was afraid this story had been discontinued; I'm so happy it hasn't as it is very interesting. I like the interaction between Sherlock and John; it's very believable and natural, even though it breaks my heart to see them hurting each other (but that's the way they are in the show as well, so it's very in-character). I'm intrigued to read what happens next!

Yea! I've been hoping you would post a new chapter for this fic. This is brilliant. I love the interaction between John and Sherlock. It was very emotionally intense and yet very true to the characters, and that isn't easy to pull off, I'm sure. This is such an intriguing mystery. I can't wait to read more.

Excellent update! Loved the banter at the start, and that confrontation was really well done - I like that Sherlock was so thrown he went on the attack by default, rather than just point out *why* it couldn't have been her. Lestrade's reactions were great as well, from trying to get Sherlock to rein in a little to completely ignoring John's exit in order to get focus back on the task.

Lovely chapter. I'll just sit here in anticipation now, wondering how they're going to work things out! ;)

Ahhhhhhh wow. This case is awesome and twisted, I love it. Can't wait for more.

I just stumbled across this fic and what can I say? It blew me away. Just fantastic. Great plot. Spot-on characterizations. And... best of all, wicked humor. Now the game is truly on, and I can't wait to see where you're going with this. (The cliffhanger is kinda evil. You know that, right?) I can't believe you haven't gotten more reviews! Anyway, I absolutely love this. The only thing that could make me love it more is if you were to bring Molly into the story. Yes, I'm a Sherlolly fan. *sigh*

Interesting turn of events and hooray for Mrs Hudson moments here.

Love your characterisations! Really like the moments worked in, like the exchange about 'business' and the kids at the hospital. And the chapter ending, oh, wincing right now. Not good.

Ooh, interesting.. more please :)