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| Reviews for harry styles love storyhis mystery girl |
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  Jo 1/17/13 . chapter 27 you should make it so that Scarlett is dating NIALL |
| Jo 1/16/13 . chapter 25 I FUCKIN LUV U AND YOUR STORIES U R SUCH A GREAT AUTHOR I WANT MORE AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH |
| Karla 1/15/13 . chapter 24 LAME don't put condoms in the story it makes it less dramatic if you know what I mean, wait obviously not good authors think of what their readers want not what makes since. duh |
| u suck 1/14/13 . chapter 25 worst fanfiction ive ever read. |
| Guest 1/10/13 . chapter 32 Can Sophie not watch a movie without falling asleep? Why are they always watching movies can't they do something more fun! Apart from that and the extremley annoying and stupid spelling mistakes I loved it! Especially the fight in hollister! :D |
| Guest 1/9/13 . chapter 5 Check spelling and grammar please! There are major mistakes that a baby could notice! |
| lily 1/1/13 . chapter 32 Wow this was a really good story! |
| Delaila 12/6/12 . chapter 10 I loveeee that one!$ |
| Guest 12/5/12 . chapter 32 continued |
| Morgann 12/5/12 . chapter 32 THAT WAS AWESOME! |
| Guest 11/25/12 . chapter 16 really great i luv it |
| Joni 11/23/12 . chapter 29 Really think REAL 2 14 year old girls going to america from the U.K. all by them selves what kind of story plot is that. Other than that the story was great I can't wait to read the next one. THANKS FOR EVEN POSTING ON HERE |
| Danitsia 11/23/12 . chapter 28 WOW stop putting fucking condoms in your stories! |
| Halli 11/23/12 . chapter 27 I think you should make it so that Zayn does ask Scarlett out,because then she can go on double dates with Sophie and Harry. Plus it will make the stories more intense if you add another couple. Also I think Sophie and Harry should go on mre dates and interact more,rather then just kissing all the time and have sex. There should be more connection is all I'm saying,so either take my advice or don't your choice. I think you should make them interact more is all I'm saying. The girl who answered the phone when Scar called should end up meeting Scar and they should be come BFF'S then they should both go to Zayn's house boy would Zayn be in trouble then |
| Nettai 11/23/12 . chapter 26 This was so fucking great I cant wait to read the next one. I hope it gets more intense! |
