I think your plot is interesting but some characters seem a little shallow and I think is not very belivable that Vanessa finds out that Snape might be her father and has very little reaction. Anyway overall I like your story a lot and hope you UPDATE soon.

Like your story can't wait until next chapter.
-Happy Reading-
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oh my, i absolutely loved this chapter! i am literally sitting on edge for more- please please update soon! :)