Huh? I don't get it.

Very nicely done - wasn't expecting the punch at the end.

Like the open-endedness. Perhaps scope for a continuation?

Wow! I suspected something like that - thought of Lilith first, but Meg is much better, it's so gratifying to hate her :-) Wonderful drabble - sweet and scary and mean, and very well written. I'll gladly forgive you every single extra word - it's worth it :D

xx Kate

Always kinda liked Meg...

DeansBabyBird

here's a soft fluffy cloud for ya, hun

Very nice - that last line sent a chill down my spine!

Viv

xx

Excellently creepy. I see some folks wanted more but I actually think this is perfect left hanging. Stopping there makes the promise of horror much more scary than actually describing something.

(But it's not a drabble!)

Interesting drabble and then some. Trust Winchester luck that Dean's kind impulse to help a girl in distress backfires on him.

But, you've left us with an evil cliffie, Dean in the clutches of Meg, surely there will be more next week? Yes, please?

Sue

Oooof. Nice twist there.

*glances around the page*

Ummm ... you know ... don't want to sound demanding here, but ... where's rest? I mean, there's a story there, isn't it?

Nice twist.