| Reviews for Return of the JubliAdder Elves |
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Breezers2000 3/21/13 . chapter 13AHHHH! I WANT MORE! I mean, please, miss? |
Fremione4Life96 3/17/13 . chapter 14You got the coffee thing from Chelle! Update soon girly (on more that just this) 3 |
Valentina Alexandrea Sparrow 3/17/13 . chapter 14Moreeee pleaseee lov it |
emthereble 3/17/13 . chapter 14wow i love the plot, it is brillant! |
DarkSnakeLordess 3/16/13 . chapter 14Interesting chap |
65ashben 3/6/13 . chapter 13This story is fantastic. I can't wait for the next update! |
Silvermane1 1/27/13 . chapter 13fantastic story. If harry is a prince of Britain magic society why can't his grandparents the king and queen fix the unjust laws on magical creatures, squibs, muggleborn or half-blood that pureblood's take advantage of? |
il2swim57 1/27/13 . chapter 13I have really enjoyed your story so far, it's original and has an interesting pairing. At first I would have suggested a beta, you had some errors, not to many, but enough to notice. Your writing has since improved, but if you feel insecure about it you may want to get one to be safe. I would like if you made the chapters longer, but it's up to you. It took about an hour to read all of it, that's why I suggested making them longer. If you want to write a reading the books story, I would suggest waiting until you finish this story. It takes a lot of work to come up with an over 150 chapter story that not only entertains, but has original content, and constant enough updates. I'm sorry if my review seems mean, but you have to be realistic on your capabilities. Not saying your a bad writer, but this story took almost a year to get this far. I still like your story and hope you continue it soon, but I have to be honest at the same time. I look forward to your next update! |
DarkSnakeLordess 1/5/13 . chapter 13He just dropped lol. |
Valentina Alexandrea Sparrow 1/5/13 . chapter 13Lol we aren't dieing! Woohoo! I love it more pleaseee |
Fremione4Life96 1/5/13 . chapter 13Good as always 3 |
mizzrazz72 1/5/13 . chapter 13Dumbledore should have got more than a couple slaps. |
Goldpen 11/18/12 . chapter 12Squeee! The dreams start! Sorry preoccupied with that idea and Seamus wanting to still spend the night with him. Is beyond cute! But whoa that ending with the wizard oath. I can't wait to see the reactions. Anuway have fun with your weird November Thanksgiving thing ;-P see you next chapter! Pen |
Fremione4Life96 11/16/12 . chapter 12Harold Really sis? HAROLD? |
Valentina Alexandrea Sparrow 11/16/12 . chapter 12Ha Mec dork is a dork moe pleae |