|Reviews for Unfaithful|
| Ks5 2/25/13 . chapter 5
Lmfao...why in the hell does Lightning have a Sailor Moon ringtone..?!...lol...man that was funny..
| Kanra-Kaoru 12/12/12 . chapter 6
Lmao Noctis is way to much.
| Guest 9/20/12 . chapter 6
I love the way you write, though, sometimes Noct is a little bit feminine, don't you think? xD But, I think that's pretty cool I guess (:
| whitefoxlia 8/29/12 . chapter 6
that was hilarious can't wait to read your next chapter.
| Angel-of-Fire-04 6/4/12 . chapter 6
What? oh wow...should have seen that plan now..arguing who gets what dress [ha noctis gets pink].But honestly whats wrong with that front desk girl..can't she see the disguise?Theres something wrong with her if she doesn't notice 2 grown men wearing dresses acting like old Noctis broke character at first before restarting!Its funny but common its attention grabbing pink dress or not..zack isnt exactly short :)
Oh the girls will get a kick out of this and Light has the sailor moon theme ringtone[its been too long ..grew up watching those cartoons]
Well cant wait for the next update.
| athena 6/3/12 . chapter 5
this conversation between noctis and light amusing me, it's like hell i'm rofl, what so amused me is that Noctis confident and the art of flirting that he shows, i like him as a big cute player yess he sure has a lot of girlfriends, and i like light as the innocent one lol
| MonsterKiwi 6/3/12 . chapter 5
She is the one named Salior Moon! 8D
Keep on going with the amusing moments between Noct and Light. (:
| Misoso 4/14/12 . chapter 4
LOLOLOL this is hilarious!
"It's like heaven and Earth want you two to be together, who knows maybe right now there's 173 stories about you two? Just a random number."
That made my day! Oh gosh and Noctis being a Barney Stinson Legendary.
Interesting triangle though I always had a soft spot for ZackXTifa :P
Keep up the good work!
| Kiko 3/23/12 . chapter 3
This story is pretty different. With the way how Noctis is acting, wonder when he will win Lighting over. xD
| M 3/6/12 . chapter 3
wow,really noct,brag! and then this quote "Lightning, are you alright? I know what you're thinking: how am I supposed control myself when I'm in such close proximity with Noctis. Hey! HOW ABOUT A SLEEPOVER!"... really?
i'm so in love with noctis, how cute he just make light in chaotic panic state, so adorable! i never get bored about this two, they really make me overexcited :D
| M 3/6/12 . chapter 2
haha funny! really noct? what signals? sooo barney!
he's smart and cute but annoying and lost at the same time...didn't he?
guys have always interpret wrong impression from girls...
| Eel Nivek 3/6/12 . chapter 3
This fic is LEGEN... wait for it.. DARY!
Hahahaha, the amount of humor you've put in is refreshing. It's not your average Lightis fic, but that's what makes it unique!
The dialogue is absolutely hilarious :)
Great job, Kayleen
| Kanra-Kaoru 3/5/12 . chapter 3
Aww bad Cloud! I was so looking forward to him appearing. Now he's gone. Lol Noctis is a mess. Can't wait for the next chapter.
| anima 3/4/12 . chapter 3
damn... noct..this is funny what else i can say..he just burst in, so straightforward and i don't know what to say to describe it...all i know it's funny XD
| anima 3/4/12 . chapter 2
hahahaha XD this is sooo funny.. im addicted to noctis and lightning...really noctis is barney in noct body he is serious but funny XD
i can't even point on any scene of them which one is funny, every scene is funny.. XD urg great hilariuos!... i'll never get bored if noct and light still there