Reviews for Konoha's Ultimate Hero
dax larson 1/1/13 . chapter 17
please continue with the cool story
Hount-Walf 12/17/12 . chapter 17
Good story, interesting, please continue soon. Really very interesting :)
dax 12/2/12 . chapter 17
continue with the story please
Matt 11/22/12 . chapter 17
What Naruto's first line should have been "Are we there yet?' you dummy! Seroiously are you still in second grade?
Matt 11/22/12 . chapter 1
"He woke up in nami no"? WHAT IN THE WORLD DOES THAT MEAN STUPID!?
dax 10/26/12 . chapter 16
continue with the story please. it is really good and you are a great writer.
avatoa 10/14/12 . chapter 9
The jounin leader of Gaara's cell is named Baki, not Baku.
avatoa 10/14/12 . chapter 8
Stop calling Ben by the name Ryu. Seriously, it is getting annoying. And what the hell is hibiki's world?
avatoa 10/14/12 . chapter 5
Dude, you are confusing the hell out of me with all of these different names your calling Ben like Ryu, Shinto, and the rider. As well as saying Ben has black hair, because we all know he has brown hair. What is going on?
avatoa 10/14/12 . chapter 4
Okay, there is something weird going on here. First, you called Ben by the name Ryu a couple if times, then refer to him as a rider. A rider of what and also what's the deal here?
avatoa 10/14/12 . chapter 2
Dude, you really need to fix your spelling and grammar. It's really atrocious.
Lumpeyeone 10/11/12 . chapter 2
I honestly thought this was a good idea but I'm having a hard time understanding what you've written. I would recommend editing to fix up your spelling and try to make sure your sentences are clear in what they're saying.
Guest 9/21/12 . chapter 14
supert history
salabambam 9/17/12 . chapter 14
yeah update soon!
demii 9/10/12 . chapter 12
I LOVEEE this story please update soon!
1 question
does ben get ever back home?
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