|Reviews for Pelgo 14|
| Bares His Teeth 9/9/12 . chapter 3
cool story keep wrightin
| Foreteller of Three 8/31/12 . chapter 11
This gettinh good, update as soon as you can
| Foevergaurd 4/5/12 . chapter 7
This is a really awesome story, I just decided to one day look for a Brink Fanfic, because this was an awesome game, an I found this master piece, keep up the good work.
| themysteriousman97 3/28/12 . chapter 6
HA, Nice opening to this chapter! Pretty violent, but still good. Now, since you know me, you know that that's my style! :P
Anyways, keep writing this story, pretty good, looks like its getting somewhere! I hope you just keep writing this. Also, I would BOLD the "POV" changes to make them clearer.
Good Job! I have reviewed!
-the-mysteriousman-who-you-probably-already-know-w ho-i-am-and-knows-who-you-are-and-is-not-a-stalker -rankrishnabagawan-lightbulb-not-indian-trains-com mie-supporter-97... .com
| Foreteller of Three 3/16/12 . chapter 6
Light: hm, things r starting 2 look bad for the founders, especially since the guests r starting to get angsty
Dark: Founders with a problem? It's their fault that they've haven't found da solution to everyone's water problem!
Me: But let's see how this'll end for everyone on the ark
| themysteriousman97 3/15/12 . chapter 5
Ok, I clicked the blue line of text, I thought that the chapter was somewhat less "morbid", I think about trains, and you failed to use the Chinese langauge in your fanfic... :P:D:P:D
-the very mysterious and you probably know who i am man who is also knows who you are... (im not a stalker...yet):)
| FeeptheNinja 3/13/12 . chapter 5
I FINALLY REVIEWED EET
ARE YOU HAPPY NOW, MONSUIER GUILT-TRIP
but no seriously. eet's good.
... Arkoral is scary. •_•
| themysteriousman97 3/1/12 . chapter 3
You must keep writing... I will continually bug you until you post your next chapter.
-The Mysterious Man
| themysteriousman97 3/1/12 . chapter 2
Wow, you just couldn't get by with any story without making a Chinese stereotype. Allow me to quote the chapter, " the sound of his voice would have an equal effect on a room whether he were saying 'I'm going to shoot you all now' or 'Yes, Santa, I'd like a magical pony for Christmas'" Really? :P Anyways, good chapter and exellent writing. You should continue you guess who this mysterious man is?
| kingkorps 2/25/12 . chapter 2
good job man I might have to start to writing BRINK stories now...
| thesalmonskin 2/22/12 . chapter 1
No, definitely not a one-time thing. I just don't have access to a PC with Internet access very often, so I won't be able to update too often.
| kingkorps 2/22/12 . chapter 1
please dont tell me this was a one time thing