Oh my goodness! Please continue this! This is one of the best fanfictions I have read about Wizard101 - Pleaseeeee continue; you're doing great. :)

I'd say this story deserves a chance. It is good really though it seems you have to work more on punctuations and spacing (make a new paragraph when someone new speaks)
As for the story, I wonder why Ambrose looked shocked knowing Katelyn's name and I can't wait to read more. Good luck for future chapters :)

Hi :D i'm grounded from my computer on weekdays so thats why i havent been updating much sry bout that -_- i hope u like my new chapter :) -DemonsVsWizards

YAY YOU CONTINUED!

I was gonna PM you back, but it's a pain on the iPod and I didn't have PC access soo...

Yeah.

This was a really good, dramatic chapter. You had a couple grammar errors, but nothing too big.

I just wanna say... EVANESCENCE IS THE GREATEST BAND ALIVE! They are my VERY FAVORITE BUT ME MUMS WENT TO THEIR CONCERT WITHOUT ME AND I WAS LIKE GRRRRRRRRRRRR!

Ahem. Sorry 'bout that.. And... Uh... Update soon.

I. I love this.

I love this! HOW DO YOU HAVE BO REVIEWS!?

I TOTALLY admire you. So many people would just give up. Good day to you.

Z.A.