This is disgusting! I dont mean your story but... just ick!

Update soon!

Blaire!BLAIRE!

Yes you did fool us -_-'

I agree with you, your enthusiasum cant be good for your health.

IT sounds like you are having a sugar rush.

Anyway great chapter. Cant wait for soul and maka to meet.

NEW CHAPTER. Please?

can't wait to read more, love it so far! Just like your other stories.

i see very little similarities in the 2 stories. both are dark and cool in their own way

Okay, I haven't really read "Where Do We Go When We Die?", so I have no idea about any similarities. But this is really good so far. It's fun to see a reversal of the roles every once in a while. Keep up the good work.

Cool story

i feel bad for maka, but in the same way was a freakin scary and awesome chapter! you tock!

I had a feeling it wasn't Maka, becuz why would Souls stepfather get a slave with such a flat chest? xD Sorry to Maka, but it's true. I only thought it was her becuz, well, the story is about Soul and Maka :3

Now you must update!

Ok, your story now is more similar to your previous Fict

Because Soul has to pick his own slave

just like Maka pick soul as her slave in 'where do we go when we die'

but, in this story, the role is reversed

.

I will wait for your next update

:p

Ali

Got us fooled alrighty xD and I enjoy reading them in a non healthy way o.o gambatte!

You always do such a wonderful job with your FF :)

love it!

hello hello here i am again to review your wonderful fic!