|Reviews for Team Olympus Book 1: The Artifact|
| DragonJo64 7/11/12 . chapter 5
you've been spelling ISAIAH wrong. IZAYAH is not a word.
| Master Noble 6/1/12 . chapter 4
Nice to see this. How long ago did you start this?
When are you introducing the elites? Not that i want you to rush so i can see my charactar...
| mcknight93 5/20/12 . chapter 4
Great job on the story, it looks like it is going pretty good.
The Spartans are interesting, and I imagine it will be weird do for them to meet the Odst.
Can't wait to see the Elites.
So great job on the story, I hope to see another update soon.
| HK FrostyMan 5/11/12 . chapter 4
Good job once again. Glad to see you fixed the commas. It makes the story a lot easier to read. Good chapter, and I also liked the prank, and the repercussions were very enjoyable as well, nice job.
| General TheDyingTitan 5/9/12 . chapter 4
| Spry 5/8/12 . chapter 4
WOOHOO! This meansthe ODST's and Spartans meet up, right? COOL!
Plus, there's a ton of explosions. That should turn out entertaining. XD
Also, loved Ash's semi-failed prank. ;D That was great.
| Spry 4/16/12 . chapter 3
HI AGAIN! Sorry it took me so long to review. :/
Great chapter! Ooh, a secret! Secrets are interesting. XD
Keep up wth the good work! And here, have a cookie. :D
| General TheDyingTitan 4/13/12 . chapter 3
Good Chapter, but if you need help with puting in comas. Read the story out loud and put one in every where you would normaly take a breath.
Also you forgot Nova's Active Camo!
An admiral as a front line trooper thats odd, usually they are at the back of the army away from all the action.
| HK FrostyMan 4/12/12 . chapter 3
Nice chapter, story is looking good. One thing though, You might want to use a few more commas, because it gets a little tough to read otherwise. But other than that, the story is coming together spectacularly. Nice work,
| ODST 262 3/27/12 . chapter 2
Hey good chapter, nice way of introducing the ODSTs. Like TheDyingTitan said it's a bit short- but that should mean quicker updates, right?
And give me a look at the book please, I love reading previews.
| Spry 3/27/12 . chapter 2
Once again, great job and thanks for using Elata. :D
You're an awesome writer, and I wouldn't mind critiquing your story, though I don't know if I'd really be able to help. I have really odd tastes is all. :P
But anyway, you rock!
| HK FrostyMan 3/27/12 . chapter 2
Great job again, glad you got to my character. Wrote him very I think. When he got kicked in the head, I thought to myself, "exactly what I pictured him like". Good job.
| General TheDyingTitan 3/27/12 . chapter 2
nice chapter but who's point of view is it from?
all around a good chapter, could have been longer but i can trade short chapters for more updates
| HK FrostyMan 3/11/12 . chapter 1
Good start- scratch that, great start. I like the way you've written all of the characters so far (Even though you haven't gotten to mine, haha). But anyways, congrats on starting a great new story.
P.S. My gamertag is NoiseTankR3K, so if you or anyone want to play something with me (i.e. Halo or Mass Effect 3) just let me know.
| Spartan S-999 2/25/12 . chapter 1
This is a good start. You have a great idea you're going with and it is off with a great start. Can't wait for the next update.
I'm just wondering, did you get my elite from the create a Spartan/Elite? Just wondering.