you've been spelling ISAIAH wrong. IZAYAH is not a word.

Nice to see this. How long ago did you start this?

When are you introducing the elites? Not that i want you to rush so i can see my charactar...

Great job on the story, it looks like it is going pretty good.

The Spartans are interesting, and I imagine it will be weird do for them to meet the Odst.

Can't wait to see the Elites.

So great job on the story, I hope to see another update soon.

Good job once again. Glad to see you fixed the commas. It makes the story a lot easier to read. Good chapter, and I also liked the prank, and the repercussions were very enjoyable as well, nice job.

-The Tank

nice prank

WOOHOO! This meansthe ODST's and Spartans meet up, right? COOL!

Plus, there's a ton of explosions. That should turn out entertaining. XD

Also, loved Ash's semi-failed prank. ;D That was great.

MORE PLEASE!

Spry!

HI AGAIN! Sorry it took me so long to review. :/

Great chapter! Ooh, a secret! Secrets are interesting. XD

Keep up wth the good work! And here, have a cookie. :D

Spry!

Good Chapter, but if you need help with puting in comas. Read the story out loud and put one in every where you would normaly take a breath.

Also you forgot Nova's Active Camo!

An admiral as a front line trooper thats odd, usually they are at the back of the army away from all the action.

Nice chapter, story is looking good. One thing though, You might want to use a few more commas, because it gets a little tough to read otherwise. But other than that, the story is coming together spectacularly. Nice work,

-The Tank

Hey good chapter, nice way of introducing the ODSTs. Like TheDyingTitan said it's a bit short- but that should mean quicker updates, right?

And give me a look at the book please, I love reading previews.

AWESOME!

Once again, great job and thanks for using Elata. :D

You're an awesome writer, and I wouldn't mind critiquing your story, though I don't know if I'd really be able to help. I have really odd tastes is all. :P

But anyway, you rock!

Spry!

Great job again, glad you got to my character. Wrote him very I think. When he got kicked in the head, I thought to myself, "exactly what I pictured him like". Good job.

-The Tank

nice chapter but who's point of view is it from?

all around a good chapter, could have been longer but i can trade short chapters for more updates

Good start- scratch that, great start. I like the way you've written all of the characters so far (Even though you haven't gotten to mine, haha). But anyways, congrats on starting a great new story.

P.S. My gamertag is NoiseTankR3K, so if you or anyone want to play something with me (i.e. Halo or Mass Effect 3) just let me know.

-The Tank

This is a good start. You have a great idea you're going with and it is off with a great start. Can't wait for the next update.

I'm just wondering, did you get my elite from the create a Spartan/Elite? Just wondering.

See ya,

S-999