sometimes i don't like dj. and i think its good because we are supposed to find the characters relatable... its not normal to like someone so completely that you can't find any of their faults... lol... i do like this fic as a whole... keep up the good work:

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-flails wildly- You left it hanging again! GWAH! I was all like freaking out when I saw the new chapter and I read and it's SOOOO good and it hangs again! You're gonna like give me a heart attack! lol

I love this! This is such a different take on the story. I can't wait for more. Hope you update ASAP!

PS: I hope DJ kicks Rose's ass. Rose is a bitch.

AAAAAHHHHHHHHH.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
DRAMA BOOOMB! As LSP would say. :D OH MY GODS. With that Marshall Lee episode that came out, I'm addicted to Fiolee, now! D: It's a problem. *ashamedly bows head*
I would say your prophecy writing skills are pretty legit. Okay, I can totally figure it out. I hate reading the prophecies and then thinking, "You stupid, it means THIS, not THAT!"
So, the first two lines means she's going to trick Eddy to get away from him. The next two lines means she's going to go meet Sean. The next two, I'm guessing the first means she and Sean will fight and it'll be bloody, and I'm sure the one after that means she'll give into the pain and become a vampire. The second to last line means... Well, she's going to try to protect her family, and the last one means... What? The gods are going to interfere? Hmmm, tell me how good my guessing skills are! I know I'm good! :P
And I added you on Pottermore. :D
OH MY GOD. ROSALIE IS SUCH A BITCH. SHE NEEDS TO DIE. Okay, no, but she needs to pay. At least emotionally or something. Just realize that she's such a bitch. Just something.
I really liked that Rachel was painting what she was. It was so unexpected but a really nice touch. (: I also really love how you can put humor into even the most serious of chapters. The whole Edward trying to figure out what was "wrong" with DJ, haha, that was some greatly needed comic relief.
So much... tension... so much... so much suspense... I cannot function. You need to update soon! Really soon! MY LIFE DEPENDS ON IT! Have I already pulled this one on you? I think I did the whole my-life-depends-on-it thing to someone... Let's pretend this is the first time, just in case. (;

Fantastic!

Loved the chapter. :):):) I'm getting really excited for the next one. :D Can't wait.

-Kirsty

*sighs dramatically* fine fine you got me, no one must know understand?! Swear it! Swear it on the styxs! Did I spell that right?...

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK! One: I HATE cliffies but Two: I love cliffies! Hey help me survive and update soon!

wow. just, wow. i haven't reviewed a chapter since i started reading this story, since i've only been reading sporadically, but i promise you that i will review more from now on.

i can't even believe what just happened. who would've guessed that sean would turn into a vampire? that's just...wow. no other words. wow.

anyway, i also have a request. I have a story, Green Eyes, and i'd really like it if you could review! pretty please with sugar on top? thanks! XD

update soon :)

-flails- I read the chapter I was waiting sooo long and now I gotta wait gain for the next! T.T

GAH, I'm a week late on reading this! Just like I am with everything else!
Ok, the line "throw a Buick at the wall" just seemed so random it cracked me up.
We finally find out about what happened the night of the dance! And even though I sort of guessed it and am glad to know it, the content of the vision isn't exactly something to be happy about...
So Sean IS a vampire! Man, I didn't see that one coming. (;
How'd Sean get into camp? He's not working with someone, is he? D:
Since he's a son of Athena, is his special power just his wit times one billion? That would explain how he does so well as a newborn.
Wait, Sean doesn't go after Danielle or DJ's mother, does he? WAIT, NO, DON'T ANSWER THAT, I DON'T WANT TO KNOW IF I'M RIGHT UNTIL WE FIND OUT.
Just that whole thing about loved ones and being able to protect themselves, if none of the more obvious people are correct... Then there was Danielle's MIA-ness and 'distractedness'...
Oh, well I didn't expect it to be so soon.
Yay, I was right! All your super-foreshadowing in the chapter really helped. :P
I just don't see how any good could come out of this between DJ and her mother. It would damage their non-existent relationship, and her mom would be even more pissed that her daughters were brought into this. They don't even know who DJ is, do they?
This chapter was so intense, I really loved it. Update soon! If you do move to another website, tell me!
Oh, and RAVENS ALL THE FUCKING WAY! I live right next to Baltimore, so... :D THEY WON!

OMG love it so much drama can not wait 4 more.

Ok, so I saw you updated chap 18 and I always go back to the last chap to make sure I didn't miss anything, and GASP! I forgot to guess who Sean's gonna go after - is it percy or Eddie?

Wow. I loved this chapter. :):):) Who Sean went after shocked me 'cause I really didn't see that coming. Can't wait for the next chapter. :D

-Kirsty