Huh, it actually makes a lot of sense if Red was a goddess...

Now that was totally unepected, but for ssome reason it works.

Making Red a CPU, but it gives an explaination for her search, her past. Even if it is a fan explaination, it works.

Secondly I really laughed when the DBZ refereneces came up.

Hahahaaha. nice! I finally understand the over 9,000 thing too!

This story is very interesting. You did a good job being detailed. I liked it.

This was a great read. I already really like the character IF.

It was sweet, and I felt a connection with the story, despite it not being very long.

I also enjoyed the fight scene. It's not often you find one well done. They normally end up awkward. But yours was great.

A fantastic read, and I definitely enjoyed it. :)

Aww *tear* that was so sweet. The more of these stories I read the more I fall in love with the characters. Awesome fight scene by the way, I like it's descriptions. I hope you write more like this

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_ ..Aw, EeeOo0h.

How sweet ;)

Is this just a game or is there a series of this?

...I just googled for images of these two.

They look SO young.

You did awesomenessfully with this thaaang..

xD

I like!

This was an interesting story... although the fandom means nothing to me, I liked the way you described things ;)

Not bad at all! No grammar/spelling errors that I can see, it ran smoothly... Great work!

You're so much better than me!

Anyways, Is this based off Rednal's comics on the NIS America forums?

Wouldn't it be great if this was put in the sequel but sadly it won't come to be.

Good job at keeping IF's somewhat hesitance to RED's wifey calling.

But I wish she accepted for real instead out of humor in the game.

If only it was like this in the original.

Red and IF are my favorite couple.

This was a great story. This is my favorite pairing that invoves IF. You did a great job.