|Reviews for Alice Wake|
| ME v2 3/23/13 . chapter 1
Good job. A nice short backstory, provides a lot of mystery, and really adds to the story. Nice ending, very creepy, in a good way.
| Lluvia-the-Wolfgirl 5/25/12 . chapter 9
Ouch! Painful backstory for Alice- which would fit pretty well, I guess.
I don't know why you talk about Alan being on drugs(illegal ones at that), I'm fairly certain there's nothing in game to support that, so that's kind of annoying.
Chapters 6 and 7 were both sweet and gave me warm fuzzies.
I liked the last chapter too(well, I assume it's the last chapter, since the story isn't marked as finished or unfinished). The way Alice faces down the Dark Presence, the talk about destiny, and the way Alice uses the Clicker- it's pretty awesome.
All in all, not bad. Thanks for the read.