Pretty good. Kinda stilted, but good. Catch ya on the flip side.

there were quite a few gramatical errors and it was pretty rushed and unrealistic. It would be a good story if you fixed it up though.

The story idea was really good...but the ending was kind of rushed and it was kind of unrealistic.

It kind of confused me but it was good.

That was...ummm...interesting? What's with the gun? Also, do you think you could put that this is T/S in the summary? You still coppied my fic, but no hard feelings, right?

It was okay. It was sort of sappy and unrealistic. Shawn was sort of over-sensitive about things. Mr. Finny is spelled MR FEENY. You have some grammer errors but that can pass. It could have been more descriptive and not as confusing. NEway, please read my stories! They are really good.

Hey this was really really good! Great job!

Hey, that was really cool. So are you finished? Well it was cool and all but I don't think that at the end, Shawn would agree that quickly to be adopted to Turner. Keep up the good work!