I read the last season(3) with Rosé in an afternoon and now I am reading this one...you are so clever! I love how everything has worked out and I can't wait until more is written.

When you get to "Turn Left", can you change the story a bit by having Rose die in the Thames and the Doctor surviving but with guilt for not saving her life and because of his depression, he refuses to help the world with the Titanic and everything.

Hopefully, as I can see it: The Doctor and Rose have children who will fly the TARDIS and after years of ageing, the Doctor and Rose (who do not have to regenerate) die of old age peacefully leaving their children behind as the new Doctors. I can just see that!

more soon please!

Please update really soon pls pls pls pls

So, basically I am loving this story, and yeah. I never review stories, or read them unless they are completed but you are an exception. I love the Doctor and Rose, and just your writing style.

Oh wow, this whole thing has been so good! I even prefer it to the original storyline! After watching the first two seasons, 3 and 4 were miserable-even though I like Donna, and (your) Martha... Seriously, what were the writers thinking, having her fall in insta-love and... eugh. Looking forward to the Ponds as well, I. like Amy. (Hope he's still the 10th by then, since the Master is gone for. good, First episode I saw was Vampires in Venice, and though I like the 11th, 10 is still my favorite)

I also like how you handled Rose's transformation; I know her becoming a Time Lady (or something like it) is a fairly common fanon plot point, but really! if the Doctor was forced to regenerate, superior Time Lord Biology and all, from just that little bit of. time he contained the vortex

Yet another awesome chapter. And you should go with Invisible Rose as your next update. I really wanna see where that one goes. :-)

I just devoured this story as soon as I finished Life with Rose. Thank you so much for these. You do such a good job of integrating your new storyline into the existing one. And I am sure plenty have said it, but this is SO SATISFYING! I had not realized how tiresome all the suffering had become. I am thoroughly enjoying your alternate timeline.

I am super curious what your going to do with River! Could she be Rose and the Doctor's child? That could get fun, especially through the next regeneration, which I assume you'll deal with as an accident of some kind. Oh the speculation! Just as much fun as trying to figure out 1)who John Hurt is playing, 2) the plot of the Anniversary and Christmas specials, and 3) Who will replace Matt Smith. Phew!

I can't wait for the next installment! Thank you so much for sharing you talents with us.

Thank you very much for all your stories they are brilliant! Please don't stop writing.

-your fan

I can't wait for the next chapters, and for you to beguin season 5. By the way, nice one with Donna flirting with the bad guys, althought a bit disturbing.

This is fantastic! Bloody brilliant! Just please, please update! I beg of you!

I just read this story and its predecessor in one crazy reading splurge. Sorry I didn't review for the other chapters, I was just too excited to see what happened next to write them, but something tells me that I'm going to end up reading this story and the one before it over and over again, so I'll have plenty of time to review! What can I say?! This story is AMAZING! I like them better than the actual episodes. Really, this is how the episodes should have played out, but God forbid that we viewers, the Doctor, or Rose have some sort of happy ending!

I just noticed one thing through this story and the one before it, I loved the fact that you included Martha (and made her less annoying by making her not fall for the Doctor), Donna and all of the other companions/cohorts. I liked the chemistry between them all, but wouldn't Martha and Donna feel more like a third wheel between the Doctor and Rose? They always seem to get along almost seamlessly and well... I would feel like a third wheel if I was in a little blue box with the Doctor and Rose for an extended period of time. Just an opinion, not a criticism.

I'll go back to review all the other chapters later, like I said, and I'm totally following you on tumblr now, but amazing job! I'll be following this story on the edge of my seat. Who knows, I might check out some of your other stuff too while I wait. :)

Nice chapter

Write faster!
Please?