Hi
Just read your story it was great.

I LOVE IT! You are FABULOUS! I cannot even express how much I have loved reading this story. Thank you so much for writing it!

Love this story. Because it bought closer to all the questions that were left unanswered. Plus I am a sucker for romance. Everybody who had a brain knew that Jarod and Miss Parker belonged together.

Wow, this was great. I have to admit that the only reason I found it was because I decided after reading Memory Ronin that I needed to read something else you had written. But, that's not important, what's important is that I love your work and think you are an excellent writer. So, I'm on to the next chapter.

very good!

I'm almost waiting for Daddy P to come back & stir up trouble for them now.... :)

Would love to have read Syd's reaction to MP & j finally getting together. :)

That was really good. I love how you got the whole family together, there is no other way it should be. You are a very good writer. I especially loved the baby talking to Madchen in the end. It was beautiful.

Oh wow. That was excellant, wonderful, blooming impressive. One of the best Pretender fic I've read. "Promote at your own risk" is great as well and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work in the future. Please keep writing. Thank you for writing. I really enjoyed these fic.
Bronny

That was absolutely wonderful. Very well written and captivating. I really think you should either continue or write a sequal. I would very much enjoy that, and I'm probably not the only one. Anyway, I positively loved it!

great, just how it should have ended

This was a great story! I really enjoyed it. Pretty original and well written. I like how the ending left just a little bit of room for a possible sequel. Keep writing more stories!

I really like this fic. While I haven't yet seen IOTH I liked how you integrated it into your story. Wonderful job!

What an excellent story, Callisto! I loved how J&MP's relationship developed throughout and how MP integrated into Jarod's family.

That can't be it! I was so enjoying it and then it ended. Please continue, I'd love to see what happens next. This was great.

Excellent story. I really enjoyed it.

This was a superb story! I wish you the best in furture writings.