|Reviews for The Great Cat Detective|
| Gosalyn2007 9/27/12 . chapter 2
Very nice story; however, I've seen some grammar errors. You're missing periods, question marks, commas, and exclamation marks at the end of the character's sentences
''I don't know'' said Rita. ''Stay here and don't come out''said Roddy hiding her in a cupboard since both him and Rita sensed the danger.
It should be like this:
"I don't know," said Rita. "Stay here and don't come out." said Roddy, hiding her in a cupboard since both him and Rita sensed the danger.
I hope I am not being rude, I was just being helpful, that's all. I hope you keep that in mind next time you decide to write a fanfic,
| Ben10magician 4/11/12 . chapter 1
Wow cool! Thanks! I would like that! I'm planning on making the Great Coyote Detective with Wile E. Coyote as Basil. Good Luck!