Methinks you need a beta or to read your story before you post. There are too many things that don't make sense. Also you basically just copied the stories me others. Just shorter and too quick and really ooc.

OH MY GOSHH I LOVE IT! MUST HAVE MORE! VOILTY WILL be NICE BECUZE I SAY SO! DAMIT! ok well see yah latter and VOTLY PLAY NICE OR NO RULLING THE WORLD OR BUGING MUGGLES! "DAM" VOLTY WACH IT! "YES MOM!HAY MY MOMS DEAD! NOPE! ...( well bye!

what a good story. i looved harry's temporary insanity moment. now we all demand a sequel. if you've already written one ignore the previous comment. well done.

luv

I liked your story it wasn't an original plot but you made it your own tale.

love it

sequel sequel sequel please wright more

Hello wonderful author! :)

This is just to let you know that your story is listed in my website "Potions and Snitches", a fanfiction site dedicated to the mentor relationships between Harry Potter and Severus Snape. Please let me know if you want me to take it down, update your info, talk about chocolate frogs, or have any questions. A link to the website is in my profile.

Thank you for your story! :) It doesn't have a frog rating yet but it's on the list.

Jan

DO A SEQUEL! DO A SEQUEL! please? that's all i have to say!

hahahahha i love it its great and where did voldemort go i want him back please make a seqeul

too quick wit the ending but good. lv totally ooc.

that was an absolutely amazing story! I loved it!

*blink* Whoa, fast.

Great fic...though the ending is a bit abrupt! Hehe...like how you associated it with star wars, hehe..funny.

Thatwas one of the most interesting fanfics I have ever read. The only thing I would suggest is proofreading. But other than that it's really good. Some of your ideas were a bit strange, but I liked the story nonetheless. And a sequel would be quite interesting. "The Life Of Potter And Snape" I can see it now. j/k Good story. :)

Very nice, just one problem through the whole story: except means to take all but one, or one set. I think you meant accept, which means to come to terms with, or to be understood. :) Sorry I had to flame that little bit, but the story was great!