So touching! :) Love the way you wrote this story, it is fantastic!

I love it! It's so beautiful

I love it :)
Thank you for writing this one dear.

awwww...

This story is beautiful, and I love it how the start was filled with humour and the end filled with tragic. May both of them rest in peace.

This was beautiful!

I love the way you showed the progression of Minato and Kushina's relationship, and I think you really nailed their characters.

They are one of my favorite pairings in Naruto, and you really did them justice.

Wonderful writing.

W.O.W! that was amazing! :) im goin to fav it! :)

I loved it! :') and I love this couple! x3

This was short and sweet. You portrayed the pairing just perfectly!

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THS! Even though I personally don't find anything wrong with this, I like TheRealGoodyTwoShoes idea to expand this into a story and make each truth a chapter. Although, stories are kind tiring so it would be understandable if you didn't want too. But I really love your portrayal of Minato and Kushina's relationship :) 3

Wow, this was very creative. I loved it! Keep up the great work.

This was beautiful! I was "DAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW"ing the whole time :) I can't give as amazing a review as you can but I can give you a review!

And cookies.

Pretty Good!

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As a suggestion on how to fix it - why not turn it into a series of short stories with each of them being based off a point of this list and the list serving as a table of contents for them.

Nicely written