Oh my goodness, this story was absolutely amazing. You captured the events of Corpse Party perfectly! I was hanging onto every word as I read. Chapter 11 made me cry a bit. But this gives me great inspiration for my own Corpse Party story. I hope mine is as great and intriguing as yours is!

Hello again! Sorry for not reviewing some of the chapters. Anyways, I think it is kind of sad that Tsukiyama died, but I'm not too bothered. I think it was pretty cool how you connected them escaping with the original game, and the aftermath made me smile. Also, Haru's mother's death made me want to cry, it was so sad. Poor kid. This was a great story, and I hope to see more Corpse Party from you.

Oh my goodness you are a writing God. This is absolutely brilliant! I'm totally going to try to draw some of these people. Could you maybe tell me more about the little ghost children? I mean like how their hair is and stuff? I want to draw them most of all. Excellent story my friend.

this is amazin and im only on this chapter!

This is getting really good. And I'm so happy you included Morishige in the story. I loved his death scene in the game, and even though you only described it from third person point of view, I still loved it. Really nice story here. Seriously. Waiting for the next chapter.

Oh man, those extras REALLY made the story go! Can't wait for the next one. I wanna see how Reika and Hideki are doing!

Oh my...this...is...amazing. I absolutely love this story, and this chapter just...blew my mind. For me, it kind of got to me. Really good job. I can't wait for the next chapter!

The entire work i've read so far is amazing! Please do update and finish too!

Yay, new chapter! I liked how Ayame's distrust was shown. Ugh...I wish Ryou would be more forgiving in the game...

H-Holy Crup you sure know how to tug my heart strings. Great job on this chapter! My favourite yet. :)

Can't login right now, but here it goes. This chapter was very nice, in my opinion. It was sad in a way, but it also had that action with Hideki and Minoru. Can't wait for the next chapter.

You're getting these chapter out so fast, but they are wonderful! They really are. I love the drama and suspense in this Chapter, and the encounter with Morishige. Hmm, I can't wait to see what happens next, and Heavenly Host's next victim.

I have nothing to else say other than you should keep up the good work and I am continuing to love this story the more I read it. It really is very good.

This was a really wonderful chapter! I loved that I could feel there Sympathy for Mayu, and the fear when they saw Shizu. I wonder why they preformed the charm, I'm sure you'll address it soon. So keep writing and hopefully have the next chapter up soon! I can't wait.

That was a good chapter. I usually don't read stories with made up characters, and usually stick to ones with characters from the original. Despite my preferences, I really like this story. I wouldn't mind if these victims were actually in Corpse Party. I can imagine everything, which is a good thing. Nice story, a good contribution to the Corpse Party fandom. Better than the ones I wrote...