|Reviews for Love and betrayl|
| manga girl geek 10/7/12 . chapter 10
Update update update
| call911imbad 2/27/12 . chapter 10
These chapters are good, but I can't help but feel that your rushing into the relationship. And then in chap 10 it says "And I hear Jaden shoving Jaden under water." Couldn't help but notice that. Other then that it was really good and I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
| call911imbad 2/26/12 . chapter 6
You update fast. Thanks for the chapter.
| call911imbad 2/25/12 . chapter 5
Its a great chapter, but it would help if you put a bit more detail in it. Other then that its alright, I just got confused on how the hell did Jason get into the chapter at the end.
| call911imbad 2/25/12 . chapter 4
Nice chapter, I wonder who char is.
| call911imbad 2/24/12 . chapter 3
Nice chapter I like the ending in this chapter. Keep up the good work.
| call911imbad 2/23/12 . chapter 1
That's a nice start. I like where the story is going. Great chapter and keep up the good work.
| dbzgtfan2004 2/23/12 . chapter 1
This is a good story. Please continue. Jaden and Alexis forever.