| Reviews for Where The Wounds Are |
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Ali 12/30/12 . chapter 1 My only complaint is that it ended. But seriously though, this was wonderfully written and their portrayals seem true to their nature. Great work! |
Abby3Jinx 12/29/12 . chapter 1 WOWOWOWOWOWOWOW! I LUV IT OMG! KEEP WRITING |
Wide-Eyed-Wonderer 10/13/12 . chapter 1This is really good. Are you going to continue it? |
The Siege 9/16/12 . chapter 1that was beautiful. i never liked ares before but now i see him in kind of a different light. :D |
Guest 7/28/12 . chapter 1 This is beautiful... I feel so sorry for Ares though... |
Zebra3003 7/13/12 . chapter 1 Lovely. It's like a game of cat and mouse. Always chasing. |
OrangeKiss 5/28/12 . chapter 1Great story. OrangeKiss |
name 5/3/12 . chapter 1 i wanted to say something negative (evil laugh) but i can't find any. why end it so quickly? |
ButterCupBabe 4/20/12 . chapter 1pointers: 1. You are a pro. 2. I like the portrayal of characters. very mythology. 3. Yippee! They finally kissed. 4. You should make more... "A kiss to torment you." Original. |
athenares 4/12/12 . chapter 1perfect :)) i love it. the feelings were real. whew thumbz up! |
livingforthememory 4/2/12 . chapter 1Aaaaah, I love this so much. The feelings are so real. You're an amazing writer! I'm shaking right now; that was so great. |
kisa 2/28/12 . chapter 1 I just want to say you write beautifully and i feel tingly now all over my body. |
SeungSeiRan 2/25/12 . chapter 1I adore Athena and your portrayal of her, via Ares, is achingly perfect. He yearns for her but can never have her. Unrequited desire at its basest, as seen with how he tries to replace with other lesser women. He can't be tamed, but it's fascinating to see how she is the one person who has any kind of hold on him. Whether she really does enjoy tormenting him or if she does have her own reasons is anyone guess. From what we can see with Ares, he's at a loss and can't figure out which is true. Athena's strength and charisma shines through. Can't say I blame Ares for his attraction to her. It's like a warped Greek-tragic version of Beauty and the Beast but with no happy ending in sight. The last moment they share - "Perhaps, then, I should be crueller still," she whispered seeing the unease in his eyes. "A kiss to torment you." - is just perfect. |
GreekGodsRule 2/24/12 . chapter 1Great story :) Too bad it had to end |
NikkiFed29 2/24/12 . chapter 1FANTASTIC! Not only was the story extremely interesting, but the characters were beautifully written. You're writing is phenomenal! |