Reviews for Where The Wounds Are
Ali 12/30/12 . chapter 1
My only complaint is that it ended. But seriously though, this was wonderfully written and their portrayals seem true to their nature. Great work!
Abby3Jinx 12/29/12 . chapter 1
WOWOWOWOWOWOWOW! I LUV IT OMG! KEEP WRITING
Wide-Eyed-Wonderer 10/13/12 . chapter 1
This is really good. Are you going to continue it?
The Siege 9/16/12 . chapter 1
that was beautiful. i never liked ares before but now i see him in kind of a different light. :D
Guest 7/28/12 . chapter 1
This is beautiful... I feel so sorry for Ares though...
Zebra3003 7/13/12 . chapter 1
Lovely. It's like a game of cat and mouse. Always chasing.
OrangeKiss 5/28/12 . chapter 1
Great story.

OrangeKiss
name 5/3/12 . chapter 1
i wanted to say something negative (evil laugh) but i can't find any. why end it so quickly?
ButterCupBabe 4/20/12 . chapter 1
pointers:

1. You are a pro.

2. I like the portrayal of characters. very mythology.

3. Yippee! They finally kissed.

4. You should make more...

"A kiss to torment you." Original.
athenares 4/12/12 . chapter 1
perfect :)) i love it. the feelings were real. whew

thumbz up!
livingforthememory 4/2/12 . chapter 1
Aaaaah, I love this so much. The feelings are so real. You're an amazing writer! I'm shaking right now; that was so great.
kisa 2/28/12 . chapter 1
I just want to say you write beautifully and i feel tingly now all over my body.
SeungSeiRan 2/25/12 . chapter 1
I adore Athena and your portrayal of her, via Ares, is achingly perfect. He yearns for her but can never have her. Unrequited desire at its basest, as seen with how he tries to replace with other lesser women. He can't be tamed, but it's fascinating to see how she is the one person who has any kind of hold on him. Whether she really does enjoy tormenting him or if she does have her own reasons is anyone guess. From what we can see with Ares, he's at a loss and can't figure out which is true.

Athena's strength and charisma shines through. Can't say I blame Ares for his attraction to her. It's like a warped Greek-tragic version of Beauty and the Beast but with no happy ending in sight. The last moment they share - "Perhaps, then, I should be crueller still," she whispered seeing the unease in his eyes. "A kiss to torment you." - is just perfect.
GreekGodsRule 2/24/12 . chapter 1
Great story :)

Too bad it had to end
NikkiFed29 2/24/12 . chapter 1
FANTASTIC! Not only was the story extremely interesting, but the characters were beautifully written. You're writing is phenomenal!
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