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| Lina Gabriev 2004-07-06 ch 1, | abuseThat was really touching. It fit well with what happened in Slayers, although I don't imagine he ever came back to her seeing as you didn't incorporate TRY. Although I have one minor quibble. I think that a FIREBALL is Shamanism. It takes power from the Flare Dragon King, I believe although I could be wrong. Wonderful job though. |
| MoroTheWolfGod 2002-05-19 ch 1, | abusemake a sequal where he DOES come back! please! |