|Reviews for Two Halves of a Whole|
| JerryF 12/30/12 . chapter 1
Great Story. I appreciate how good this story is. keep up the great work. I look forward to reading my MCgibbs from you.
| Tipear 9/9/12 . chapter 2
OMG, this was breathtaking. Very intense and very hot. I love it when Gibbs is possessive and/or jealous. And Abby doesn't deserve Tim, so I'm not really feeling with her. I hope you'll do more McGibbs stories.
| delia cerrano 3/6/12 . chapter 2
What a story! How intense...how hot! They were indeed addicted to each other & happy to be so.
| stareagle 3/3/12 . chapter 1
Gibbs talking to Abby while intimately and actively connected to Tim was very painful to think about. It was an act of conscious betrayal but it underscored how OOC these characters are! You were not kidding when you said dark! And you have definitely delivered dark.
I wish Tim would man-up and tell Abby not to cling to him. He loves her as a friend but needs independence to pursue another relationship.
But you have woven a tale of addiction and addicts will sell their morals and soul to get what they want. In this case Tim is not the only addict, Gibbs is one too.
| hotflower901 2/28/12 . chapter 2
Jethro is an all or nothing kind of guy. Timmy is a hopeless romantic.
| Flowerfairy30 2/24/12 . chapter 2
That was very good.
| Yum2 2/24/12 . chapter 2
I'll stay in denial over the Abby and Tim in a relationship part.
I liked it.
Thanks for the hard work.
| SlytherinQueen020 2/24/12 . chapter 2
Autoerotic axphixeation (that is so not spelled right). Anyway that was so hot and also a little dark. You should really write more of these. Are you going to do a story about the Reynosa's.
| Lidil 2/24/12 . chapter 2
Gibbs is OOC?
And Tim isn't?
This piece is beautifully dark.
Tim and Gibbs are where they want to be.
And *that* is all that matters.
| alix33 2/24/12 . chapter 2
"After fighting his conscious for maybe a second," - "fighting his conscience".
"just got to work and Gibbs had been suffered to watch Abby fawn over Tim in worry." - "Gibbs had suffered".
| LIGHTNSHADOWS 2/24/12 . chapter 1
Abby needs to let go of Tim,and realize that Tim belongs to Gibbs and vice versa.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
| hotflower901 2/24/12 . chapter 1
Difficult to imagine Gibbs or Timmy as cheaters. This left me feeling kinda of sad.
| Gottahavemyncis 2/23/12 . chapter 1
Hey, Tim deserves happiness and if he loves Gibbs and Gibbs makes him happy, then go for it! Abby had her chance and has been walking all over Tim for years. And outright mean to him too. I'm glad Tim realizes he doesn't love her, he does need to let her go. Yeah, Gibbs talking - to Abby - while having sex with Tim was rather an incredible feat!
| alix33 2/23/12 . chapter 1
"the possessive and jealousy was so dark in his eyes Tim almost stopped breathing." - "possessiveness and jealousy"?
Tim cheating on Abby with Gibbs is certainly different. Not that I am complaining, mind...
| delia cerrano 2/23/12 . chapter 1
Dark & delicious. I think Abby is a spoiled brat who uses Tim when she wants. So I hope Tim feels bad he isn't telling her up front but he stays with Gibbs. Love it when Gibbs is jealous!