aww this was so cute story! 3

Great, love this pairing too But up the rating, don't want it to be taken off the site because you didn't follow the rating-content rules ;)

Yes! TakagixShiratori all the way! Thank you for writing this wonderful oneshot. I myself am a fan of this pairing but have been troubled as of late by the lack of stories shipping Takagi and Shiratori. Thank you for rectifying the situation some. I hope to read more from you!

I did enjoy my read and would like to see more of this couple. However, I should point out that putting in some of the Japanese phrases in fanfiction is not very wise. Unless it is essential to how the story's development, it is highly unnecessary. In this story, it was clear that they were not needed and served as a kind of distraction. Other than that, I really enjoyed it and would like to see more done with this couple! _

Please...

Let them do "it"

well, you know what I mean...

This story should be M.

But I love Takagixshiratori, so..

please..write more...

OMG someone else finally did it! I have been waiting for a fanfic of shiratorixtakagi for a long time. I wrote a two chapter lemon of them but it isn't as good as this.

I'm looking forward to seeing more stuff from you in the future.

I love it!