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| Reviews for The First: Id de Nomen The root of the name |
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  Guest 8/29/12 . chapter 3 I really loved it :) It was very sweet! |
| thezooqueen 8/29/12 . chapter 1 I love the plot so far. I want to continue reading it. 3 I found many grammatical and spelling errors. Some parts it was hard to follow because the story wend from one thought to the next so the reader does not know it is a change of scene. (please don't hate me for pointing these out. I am not trying to be mean. I really want to continue reading your story!) |
| Yo 6/14/12 . chapter 3 I didn't like the language Prof. Grabiner had. But overall the story was really sweet. |
| Yo 6/14/12 . chapter 2 much better. Sad that her parents left. |
| Yo 6/14/12 . chapter 1 confused towards the end. And a few errors in spelling, but overall not bad. |
| alicetsuki13 3/5/12 . chapter 3 love your story! It's so cute write again please, i look forward to it |
 hippiewitch77 2/27/12 . chapter 3I love this! Please continue. :) |
| Mldy96 2/25/12 . chapter 1 I have to agree with someone about the word 'expelled' not fitting the story, and that eighter 'abandoned' or 'disowned' would be better, latter being the best option (at least for me). Although I found a "few" grammar mistakes, the story itself caught my interest and I'm looking foward for the next chapter. :) |
| noname 2/24/12 . chapter 1 I think this story is already great and I can't wait to read the next chapter! :) However,... I must note that 'expelled' might not be the best word for Cesia's situation as it's the synonym of 'kicked out of school' (which is not the case here) rather than 'abandoned'. But aside from this, I like your story |
