You know it would be teally cool to do a sex scene i havnt scene one on here i mean it doesnt have to be like porn style or anyhting just somethingnall fan girls want like i see in ...if your wanting to we could work together to write one, i was contemplating doing something like that but we dont havento do the whole flea sex thing like she could tach him how to doit human style. What do you think?

your probably just being too lazy to type his name correctly!
taking the easy way...
oh. and liking this story so far. but "frank" just is'nt cutting it for me.

Love it!

Oh no, no, Francoeur! Don't do this in front of everyone! *Facepalm* That should have been done back at L'Oiseau Rare, when it was just the two of you there!

Cringing so hard in secondhand embarrassment right now...

aw...why did it haf to end

YOU WRITE THAT SEQUEL THIS MINUTE YOUNG LADY!

hug a bug

awwwwwwww that's so cute that they end up together and all the other chapters where great I would have to read them over and over can't wait to read another chapter

This was very nice! I enjoyed reading the chapters and find out adorable with fluff and action! I can't wait for the sequel!

Great work! Love!

oO

Heh. How do fleas mate? First, they need to eat (or rather, drink, since it's blood) their full, which helps to create the mood (and fertilize better), then a FEMALE gets on a MALE's back, and then the process begins... for like, a few long hours. The male flea's... part has spikes over it, too, and is about as long as third of flea's body. Best luck to Lucille! :3

i won't say it in reveiw, but private message me. i know how.

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Hey, good start at writing- take care though. Don't get tripped up in your pacing.

Gah! How cute! Why must Frank be so cute! And even more with Lucille! I wonder where he'll take her.

Great chapter!

omg i love this, ever need help with anything, i've been writting stories for 4 years

Cute story I look forward to more _

I liked the ending of the last song, that was a good cliffhanger. As fir the whole chapter, it made me laugh when everyone knew Franc was in love with Lucille except for the latter XD Probably too busy hiding her own love for him to see his love for her.

I've come your like your writing sryle, but I feel like your missing something that could make perhaps even better than it is now, I don't know what. But don't take it personally! I just think you can improve, and noting(IdunnoWannaMakeItSeemMean)

I can't for the next chapter and knowing Lucille's reaction!