Poor Chiriko...

But this is a good story...

Hope you update soon

... Really good... Kinda like my fic (the abuse part, not the story idea) that I'm uploading right now, 'cept mine is set after he is reborn.
Anyways right more!


Random 'Stop the abuse' posters are posted up

HEY! ::starts to cry:: That's not right! That jiji emperor ::coughhENTAIcough:: raped Chiriko! Kisama... That's not fair! That old man got to rape Chiriko-san before I did!-- Wait.. Uh.. You didn't read that... Gar... Stupid thoughts! I don't think I should write my thoughts anymore. ()-.- Anyways, even though I find this fic very wrong (CHILD ABUSE!), it's adictive. Besides the fact that I almost literally threw up the ramen I just ate (-.-) I wouldn't mind reading a little bit more ^^() Oyasumi nasai!

*blinks at you and licks her lips* Where's the rest of this? Please. Type quickly. Or I'll tickle you until you finish it.

Can you tell I like it? *grins* Excellent storyline and characterization, no da!

*BAWLS* Argh, you good writers...You managed to get to the subject without a lot of gross adjectives, and kept the characters very well. Someone who hasn't seen FY would probably read this fic and understand it...Poor Chiriko. And Nakkie-poo-chan. x__X

Please tell me you're going to continue this! *makes chibi-eyes* Please, please, please! It's one of the best and most original FY fics I've read! Must have more! Must have Chiriko angst! @_@

hey! cool story, a little dark but it great!

**eyes wide** Ch-chiriko.....**hugs the poor little guy** NOOOOOOOOOO!!!! **hughug**

That was really well written and now I love Chiriko more than ever. **hugsquease** Write more...he has to meet the Suzaku seishi at some point, right. ? **big, sad eyes as she huggles her Chiriko-chan**

this is a great story from an unusual POV. i luv it, do continue.

Please write more..... I beg of you. I really like the plot. Write more,more,more and more please!

*sniffle* this almost made me cry! Poor Chiriko! I hope you get the next chapter out soon!

*shreaks and bites her hankie* Poorpoorpoorpoor Chiriko!!!!! It's one of the best Chiriko fics that I've read!!! ^^ Will there be a sequel???

... I am speachless... This was so wonderfully dark, tragic and angsty... And Chiriko's the main character... That's what I love about your fics, Ascot no Miko-sama... *_* Chiriko-angst! ^^ Yay... Please tell me there will be a sequel... *puppydogeyes*

Oh...My...GOSH!!! This is deffinately one of the most interesting stories I have read in a long time! Keep up the good work!

Tsukiyo Uchibayashi

wow. Just...wow. That was amazing! The imagery was increible, the character portrayals were right on target. I love how you write Nakago. And with your original characters...wow, again. In the short lines they have here, you have given them deep and meaningful personality.
I will look out for the next chapters to come. I really really enjoy this--it's rare to come across something so well-written on ff.n!
Good job, and keep writing! ^_^
Ja, bashou