| Reviews for Little Senju Tales |
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Isilarma 5/7/13 . chapter 2I love the relationship between the two of them. Great job! |
Iroka 3/28/12 . chapter 2I read this awhile back but I just realized that I never reviewed for it. This is a cute chapter, I really enjoyed it. Your take on the Senju brothers is very unique and so believable. I really love the personality you give to them. Especially the scene where Tobirama is hesitant to invite the Uchiha to their planned village. If Tobi was right about the whole police force thing, then it makes sense. 3 I also really love how even though Senju and Uchiha are mortal enemies, Hashirama was open to accept them. He truly was deserving of hokage. *cries proud tears* I look forward to more little Senju! I think it'd be a great idea to mix it up some. You know with the first two chapters being cute, perhaps then have one super serious, then one sad, then one that just pisses you off. I think it'll be a great way to keep your readers begging for more. xD I like the mix up of Tobirama's kid being in the first chapter then the next Tobirama as a kid. It's great to jump back and forth, it will also keep people interested. Oh and of course, more Tobirama. The fangirls demand it! o3o |
whitefang245 3/7/12 . chapter 2Adorable as always 3 |
Iroka 3/3/12 . chapter 1I agree with WhiteFang, Tobirama in the next one! Was a cute one-shot, it made me smile. I definitely wanna see more of their family life. :) |
whitefang245 2/24/12 . chapter 1Lovely story as always Just make Tobirama be in the next one plleeeaaassseee? Heh heh |