Oh my gosh more please! It's sooo good!

I love this so far!

You need to update it please!

i love how Hidan is so sad,it's soooooo sad but It's really fitting

cool chap. write more plz.

Bwaha. Torture

Chuu. So far so good. It's a nice start. Promising.

Another. Chapter. Now.

Please write more, I want to know what will happen sooooo bad

–evil smirk- XD love the story so far

"You also might be asking why there's a guard and he's calling the albino name's and is treating him poorly, we'll there was a time when black people were disrespected and abused"

I believe that people can do what they will with fics they author, but. . . I can't help but testify that that bit might've been unnecessary. And offensive. I see the point you were trying to get across with Hidan's condition being a hindrance and disability, I just think that. . . maybe you could've chosen better. . . supportive detail.

It's no different than when people write about historical Germanic disaster (i.e. WWI - WWII). When you bring up stuff like that, it's important to consider the audience who may be at a spectacle and how some, majority or minority may react to it; lest your work gets flamed to a max.

I'd hope I'm not sounding whiney or melodramatic, I just wanted to highlight a precautionary point for that section of the fic because I do not at all believe it was your intent to sound offensive. I'd still gladly read the rest of this fic. Keep writing. You'll only get better.