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BearyFunny66 5/11/13 . chapter 5I hope you find time to come back and update this story! Great story! |
pathgirl 3/7/13 . chapter 5Well, it does not really feel finished, though it hints of happier days to come. Maybe it needs just a post-script, to skip the mushy stuff? |
pathgirl 3/7/13 . chapter 3Love your story. A bit OOC for both characters, but still very good. |
Guest 3/6/13 . chapter 5 How about this? Maybe one update every 2 months - please! This story (like all your other stories) is just lovely. I keep coming back to it. So, we have one due for Feb and then the next can be April. I think that is fair. :-) hope real life is well and good busy! Please write when you can! |
LazyNezumi 3/4/13 . chapter 5OMG PLEASE CONTINUE PLEASE PLEASE |
SusanMarieS 2/10/13 . chapter 5Yay great job. Guessing the m's for the language |
itat88 12/30/12 . chapter 5hey! long time no read. took me a while to read the chapter, but - as usual - I liked it. Reading both perspectives on the same situation makes it interesting but also a little boring, because nothing really seems to happen, even though a lot happens in the characters' minds. I find it difficult to understand Snape's actions when he so much wants her to know the real him but does nothing for it. He sounds a little desperate in parts but doesn't act... so I guess he should do so soon. I laughed at that one: "The daily soaps and the football and the potions and the dusty books that he kept in his living room" - Snape and daily soaps... seriously? And I liked that Hermione spoke her mind and was able to bring the lion to roar out loud towards the end of the chapter, after all. In a bad romantic comedy/romance movie, I guess they probably would have stared at one another and then kissed because of all the emotions in the room... yet, they didn't but we caught a little smile :) Keep going, I'll keep reading and reviewing (even though it may take quite a while to do so) |
A. Deca 12/26/12 . chapter 5Oh God, does he enjoy being bossed around? Or is his love for her allowing him to enjoy having a woman tell him what to do? I adore this story- thank you for working so hard on it! Have a happy new year and a merry (but belated) Christmas! |
Pieredae's Muse 12/19/12 . chapter 5I'm so glad I decided to check your profile and see if you'd updated! I've missed this story and your writing in particular. You have this wonderful sense of your characters that makes them feel tangible, like real people rather than fictional characters. They still willfully misunderstand each other, but thank goodness SS is wanting to let her in and Hermione is starting to stand her ground! Hope Real Life treats you well and we can look forward to another chapter soon! Cheers- P |
rookseer 12/16/12 . chapter 5Please update really really soon! |
rookseer 12/16/12 . chapter 2Love it so far... |
Guest 12/11/12 . chapter 5 ooh! you wrote again! Thank you! nice chapter - picks up right where you left! |
kelsey.chappell 12/9/12 . chapter 5Keep going! |
JaneDoh0 11/19/12 . chapter 5Hooray for provoking Hermione! I am glad she at least was able to choke out the truth (or part of it anyway). |
Starflower1984 11/19/12 . chapter 1Great! |