HAHA they got sprung! Can't wait for the next update!

Update when you can!

loving this, update soon!

can't wait to find out who said OMG.

x.

hi i hope your going to update soon x

This is really good writing. If you feel confident enough do come over to the forum. Everybody is so friendly and you can pm anyone for help especially Miss Shawna. She is always there to help. Keep up the great writing xx

Rescuelover xx

more please really interesting story

Realy good can't wait for the next please update real soon!

I hope Lara tells Dean that she loves him or they both at least work things out!

Love it and I can't wait to see the talk between them

Realy good can't wait for the next one i wonder whats wrong with Dean!

fantastic update, eww dead body, i wonder what chase is going to say

Omg. Amazing is all I can say. I love the part where Dean screamed like a little girl. So funny. Keep up the great work. :D

Realy good, can't wait for the next!

I wonder what everyone will say and how Dean will react to her being hear!

Loving the work here - as xxletgoxx said, if you're up to it, head over to the forum, and we'd love to see you there!

If not, keep up the amazing work :)

i love it, especially the convo going back and foward between jordan and deann:) if you feel confident enough sign up to and post your stories on there, heaps of people are on there regulary to read them

Amazing and funny. I love the "No stupid" part. Cracked up laughing. Great job', can't wait to see your next chapter. :D

Love it. Can't wait for the next chapter. :D