Ooh...
Cool!
Please update.

Oh my God, this is absolutely amazing. Please keep going! This NEEDS to get published.

this is really good so far :) but you did get a few details wrong, like newt was one of the original gladers, and he didn't get his "bad leg" until after he was in the glade for a while. but this story is still great. can't wait for the next chapter :)

this is good and i love newt so any storys with him im going to read, but you got some of the details wrong.

Newt was an origional glader, i think it says in the scorch trials somewhere that him and about 30 others (including minho alby and frypan) woke up led around the box...or sumit like that.

But this is still a good story, i like you're writing style.