Wow...brain shock! lol. Though surprisingly, I think I understood most of the science conversation. Any more math, however, and I'd have been totally lost, haha! Anyway, this chapter was VERY well thought out. How you come up with all of these new concepts, is beyond me, but they're incredible for sure! You give the story of FFVIII a whole new depth - one that I ACTUALLY can see being true. Not saying I totally believe all of it myself, but it definitely holds merit.

As always, the ending was perfect! I love SquallxRinoa - and you only make me like them more and more. Please update soon! I know things have been rather hard on you lately, but hopefully that won't dissuade or keep you from updating. I'm really enjoying this more with each new chapter!

I just love a good Squall/Rinoa chapter - and this was one of them!XD I always love how you portray their interactions and it's really inspiring, too. I'm still curious as to what Caraway is up to, but maybe I'll find out in the next chapter. If not...hopefully soon.

I think you did pretty well with this chapter, despite what you might think about it, personally. I'm the same way. Ironic, huh? When we think we didn't try, those are the ones people tend to enjoy the

Freakin' awesome chapter! I'm so glad you updated again!XD I have to say, you totally had me laughing with the whole "As Squall was ever the silent warrior, nothing was heard from the Squall army except the whooshing of blades." ROFL! That was awesome!XD So true.

Anyway, this just keeps getting more intense - and it's rather inspiring. I really want to know what Caraway's up to and what's going to happen next. You cover such good ground in such short time. I could learn from this. Keep it up! I hope you can update again real soon!

I am thoroughly enjoying the story so far. I also made a FF8 story called Power Struggle. Give it a look when u can. I can wait to find out what the deal is the Centra Continet.

Woo-hoo! NEW CHAPTER! Holy crap though. There are some things about this update that are WAY too freaky - and I'm not sure could be called "coincidences", lol.

Anyway though, I'm dying! I have to know what happens next. Please update soon! Now, I'm curious about Caraway's thoughts and intentions.

really liked the squall/rinoa interaction in this chapter. story is getting even better than it was before (which is hard to say since it's been good since the beginning). can't wait to read more!

oh my gosh! the plot to this story is just so amazing! everything is so well structured. I never seem to know what's coming next. update soon!

Knew he would be cloned using data!

GRARGH! How did I not think of Watts as the informant? lol. Dang it!

This was a really good chapter. Your perception and theories about the game are so well-founded and incredible! I am totally impressed every time I read this story. I really cannot wait to find out more.

Not to mention, I LOVE the conversation between Squall and Rinoa!XD Those two are just so cute together.

Wow! Another update already? Awesome! Making up for lost time? lol. Okay, kidding!

Anyway, it's really getting intense now. I totally can't wait to see how this unfolds. Didn't expect this all to happen so soon, but I'm thoroughly enjoying this just as much as before!

Yes! Yes! YES! You finally updated! I was wondering what had happened to you! Good to know you're still here!

Anyway, I loved this chapter! Zell really does make a decent commander - and you make me like him even more due to how he's portrayed in this story. He's already one of my top favorites, but

This is really getting good! Hopefully you can update again soon!

Wow. I really liked it! I surely will keep reading

That was awesome! Totally didn't see the Squall clone coming somehow. I LOVE that you did that! Clones was always one of my favorite things to have challenge the story's hero, lol. But, really...they are!

Anyway, back on subject...the wait was totally worth it! Also...I don't know why, but the last line gave me chills.

AW crap i just kept reading on and on. I didnt notice i was on the latest chapter XD

keep goin! this is great stuff!

Er, isn't Caraway a general, not a president?