Reviews for One Small Oversight
Guest 1/31/13 . chapter 1
Wow, your stories are really funny. And that "power of presence" part had me rolling. Breaking the Fourth Wall. XD
PhinalPhantasy 1/20/13 . chapter 1
LOL
DarkFonist 6/10/12 . chapter 1
I'd always wondered what his reaction would be to doing something like that. Another amusing read.
darkdrow 3/9/12 . chapter 1
i wont lie...i enjoyed this ficlet...more then i should, thank you for sharing friend xD great sense of humer and great stuff
Ramza 3/3/12 . chapter 1
An epic tale of an epic vidya gaem
Big-Babidi 2/27/12 . chapter 1
Not a bad parody. Poor Gaff doesn't stand a chance against Ramza's predictions. Reading this makes me want to see a fic showing the whole process of convincing Gafgarion to be an empty handed mage.
Vegeta the 3rd 2/26/12 . chapter 1
Lmao

Very short and comedic one shot. I expected the effect to be that Ramza brought a Black Chocobo and it flew over to help. But teleporting is just as funny. Dialogue might not have matched Gaffgarion much, but he certainly dug his own grave concerning Agrias.

Well done. Certainly got me laughing.

-Vegeta the 3rd