|Reviews for Didn't See That One Coming|
| I Am Blueberry 2/28/12 . chapter 2
YES! YOU PUT SUNSTREAKER IN! That made my day right there. I thought you were only puttin' in da little twins. Ooh, so happy! I love where you are going with this; this is something different then some chick absorbing the AllSpark and being so awesome for no damn reason. Love your route much, MUCH better. I really enjoy your honesty in the author's notes, makes things feel more You in your stories, like you're truly writing from your heart.
B.T.W. I LOVE Sideswipe's dialogue so far, keep it up! And here's just a pointer, Sunstreaker is really vain, and hates just about every human on planet Earth, so if you find it troubling to write dialogue for the twins you've got them pretty much painted perfectly.
| I Am Blueberry 2/26/12 . chapter 1
So far so good. How ironic is it that your (I'm assuming) main character is named Krystal 'cause that's what one of mine is in several of my stories. I love the part where Sideswipe says, "Didn't see no red stuff," that was perfect, totally something he would say. And "Didn't know he could drive that fast." Please continue!
| ive-got-2-many-ideas 2/26/12 . chapter 1
snicker, this should be interesting. I'm in hairdressing at school too. keep up the work!
| xXTriforce-of-PowerXx 2/26/12 . chapter 1
I like it, I like it! Wonder what'll happen to Krystal?