Great story! Very authentic to the series. I could easily picture this as an episode, which is all you can look for in a fan fiction. The only critique I have is how the Stokes issue was left unresolved. If you are finishined with the Stokes character, then perhaps offer some conclusion to the reader (ie: turned into troopers, Rob hunts down, etc..). If this is meant to be a hanging thread, then perhaps offer an extra line of dialogue to set the reader up for an anticipated conclusion down the road sometime at your choosing. (ie: "I'm afraid this isn't over yet. Stokes is still out there and he' s beant on avenging a son..". Just my 2 cents. Again, great story, look forward to reading more.

I was in love with this story when I read it back in 99/00 and I still am.

Lovely work, hope you do more.

Hey, what a great start! But Im a bit disappointed. Sorry! I was so excited because of a Rob/Matt-story... And then Collin again... *(

a to be continued? I hate it when tv shows get you all into a story and then leave you hanging for a week! I won't be able to sleep tonight, now!

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I can see the hard work in this one, and it's very interesting! It's going to be hard to wait for the next part! Definitely different from the episode in the show, and I think this one is working out to make much more sense than the that one, too. Looking forward to more!