I have to say this story is very cute. I hope you add more to it soon cuz I absolutely love it :). Keep up the good work :).

Arwenicole

Hey - great work on this - I'm really liking this new story. Just a tip - I know that your following along with the episodes - but you might want to reference something about the case so that everybody knows that's what your doing... people who are quite as familiar with show could be confused that all of a sudden Spence was hurt ie 'why is he all beat up' - a reference point to the case will help them be like 'oh... he just got kicked in the ribs by Hotch during LDSK and had his lip busted open by the butt of an assault rifle' - just one little fact or comment can put a scene totally in perspective :D

Did I already mention that I'm loving this story so far... there are just sooooo many fun facets of JJ and Spence's relationship to cover... we could all write fanfiction forever and still not cover them all :D Can't wait to read more.

First the good: I really loved their sweet affection for each other, and his stammering cuteness. Love the heart-shaped pancakes.

Then the confusing: Why is Reid beat up? What happened? Something after the jazz club. And it was jarring to see him call her Jenny.

Would love to reid more!

Loved it

How did Reid get a bruised lip?

COntinue!

really cute! i agree with the centering of the text being somewhat distracting, but i'm really excited to read future chapters:)

Loved it

Cool story, can't wait for the rest.

First of all - yay! You're back with a new story :D - Second of all this was cute so far - and I love that you referenced Reid telling Morgan that his date with JJ was 'Top Secret' - I've always wondered about that :D

The only thing was that the centering of the text was little bit distracting to me - but that's a pretty minor thing I suppose...

Great work - can't wait to read more :D