i hope this returns :( this is an amazing start! would love to see more

Just came across your story, nicely done. You really captured Emma's defensiveness and portrayed it well. Aren't you gonna continue? Such a pity.. pretty, pls...

hey, just came across ur story, its really different from the typical stories and interesting, so plz keep updating!

another great unfinished story :o(

if you can't finish, don't start...

please don't stop... Please...

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! PLEASE!

This is so good! I hope you continue !

Great story! Hope to read more soon!

So good! Please keep up with this story! It's so good. You keep me coming back for more!

Let me say that every chapter is better than the previous one! You write so well and this story is so interesting... And jenny with the bike? Well I hope she was kidding with that 'blue one' or it Will take sone time to be' able to seduce Emma...

:))

Thank you for sharing with us and please go on!

Really enjoyed this chapter. Emma's bitterness and defensiveness is very well written. She really needs to get over herself. Am sure Jenny will find a way through!

OOOOOooo It's getting interesting! I love this story thus far & can't wait for more :)

good idea wearing a plaid shirt during writing this chapter because it's a good chapter :)

and jenny definitely should've got the blue one :D

but your chapters are really to short !

i'm looking forward the next part ;)

I am really loving this story. I like how Emma is so defensive and unwilling to let Jenny in. And Hotte is adorable as usual! Cant wait to see whats next!

I just really love how this story is going. Emma being wary of getting hurt again. Hotte with his endless optimisim. Jenny, hmmm, trying to right the 'wrongs' of the past maybe? Trying to start anew, but also wary herself. All I know for sure.. Excellent story!