|Reviews for Entwined|
| jack white 9/16/12 . chapter 1
what the hell are tales of the nutcase anyway i like your harry potter ones much better you should update those instead of these
| Darkhymns 3/1/12 . chapter 1
Loved it. I can't even tell how much I love it, but it's a lot. :D Just reading how they slowly become close friends and have such an understanding of each other was the best- you did it so well. All the parallels between them were awesome, and I really liked the little tidbits of younger Alfred's life
I think my favorite part is where you show Alfred give Haplo his true name. "His enemy, his friend, had just delivered himself into his hands. Names granted power, after all, power over one's very soul. By entrusting Haplo with his name (because it was a matter of trust), Alfred- Coren- had given him the greatest compliment he had ever received,"- I think those lines are probably the best ones in showing just how important that moment was for the both of them.
Awesome job as always!