great story i love it cant wait to see what happens next

love kittykat6625

I’m back! I Loved the new chapters! Sorry for such a late review! My computer died on me. :( I can't wait for more!

Awww poor Carmen. And Sam and Dean. They need to get bobby and Gave back. :(

Another fantastic chapter! So sad though. :( I hope Deans okay.

I can't wait for more! :)

Maddy

Well then. I think we have reached a new peak in the depressingness factor. Thing Two, how much more crap do you plan on throwing at them? I don't know how much more they can handle!
Fantastic, as usual. What else, coming from you?
Your twin across the pond
Alice

I know I am not far into this story, and this review is short and all; but at least it is one? XD Anyway, I love Gabriel and I am glad that he is alive! :D When you mentioned Balthazar, I was like, YES, I hope he learned from him...so he can be alive. 3 Oh, and I really, really, do love everything so far. I do! In the beginning, when you mentioned high school, I was like confuzzled. Then you cleared it up in chapter 3 or was it 2? XD I don't remember, but then I was like oh, okay. :P Really, I do love it. The characters so far seem in character and I am interested in the plot. I can't wait to read all the way to the last chapter.

Ahhh! Come on man! Youre killing me!
Carmen needs gabriel! Bring him back soon!
Update soon!
And if you would, could you look at my story Between the Lines? I need some more feedback is all. :)
Thanks!
Alyss

Oh please don't leave it there!

I'm about to run out of battery so this is gonna be a short review but still - it's a review that must be written :D

Gabriel's memories were so sweet! I especially liked the one of him taking his first steps :D Plus, since I didn't review the last chapter, Gabriel's death was amazing! Especially Michael and Lucifer's reactions! So heartbreaking! (But brilliant too! :D)

I'm super glad Jiah and Balthazar are together again, and now of course with Gabriel :D Although, I'm anxious about what's gonna happen to Gabriel because of Virgil (he just loves being a dick with wings! (Virgil, not Gabriel :P) lol)

And Bobby! I knew it was gonna happen but it still tears my heart out! Poor Carmen! And Sam and Dean!
I'm also hoping a little that this story will get to Castiel's return and hopefully bring a little light back to their lives :D

Such a brilliant story! You have me hooked! Keep writing! :D

Xx Marie xX

Omg!

Gah!

I'm actually crying! I didn't even cry when Balthazar died in the finale, but I'm crying now :P

Omg!

And Jiah! Oh dear lord! So heartbreaking! I can't believe he dies in the war! And so young! Omg! (I'm really saying that too much now :P lol)

*deep breath*

It was a brilliant chapter! So much detail and you really evoked my emotions (really, you definitely did! :P) - especially with Gabriel's last line - it was perfect!

I gotta say though, this chapter is a credit to how awesome a writer you are, in all aspects! Not only can you make me laugh but you can make me cry too! Which is something not a lot of people can do! :P So, give yourself a big pat on the back and if its not too late, please give Gabriel some comfort lollipops, cookies, cakes, whatever he wants to make him feel better :P lol

Well done on an emotional rollercoaster of a chapter! Super excited to read on and see what happens to Carmen! :D

Hi again :)

I'm so sorry if I'm spamming your inbox, but I just had to review this chapter! So much awkwardness! I had to laugh! :P Love how Gabriel told her he was her Guardian angel :) And then when she met with Bobby - it was so sweet! :D

I laughed out loud at her description of Sam (earned me some pretty weird looks from the people around me but oh well - it was funny :P) - she had met a giant! :P lol!

Little suspicious of Raphael - he's such a jerk! Gabriel could take him any day! :P

Good for Gabriel showing up for her in Bobby's house with Sam, Dean and Bobby all there! I was proud! :D

Well done so far!

Xx Marie xX

Hi :)

So, I decided to give this story a go, before I wasn't really sure about it because of Carmen, but you're OC's have been pretty awesome and so far, so is she :D

Loved Gabriel's reaction to being told he was going to be a Guardian Angel :P That was really well done! :D

I feel so sorry for Carmen! She seems so nice but, I've got my fingers crossed that Gabe practices some pranks on those bullies to keep himself entertained :P lol

Great start to the story :) I'm away to read on now :D

Xx Marie xX

Okay serious cliffhanger alert! Lol. :)

Omg Gabe's memories were so sweet! Micheal and Lucifer being big brothers! Aww! :))

Gasp hes been gone for months! Wow! Poor Carmen! She needs her guardian angel back!

Please let Bobby be okay! They don't need to lose anyone else! Especially Carmen!

Loved the new chapter! :)

I can't wait for more!

Maddy

WHY THE SADNESS? And why is everything bold and italicized? It's bothering me!
Poor Gabe. And Balth. But Jiah mainly. He was all alone for so long! Yet still he waited for them... Ah, our little lightning spark.
MORE SOON!
Your sad/tired twin across the pond
Alice
P. S. BUBBLES!

This is going to be very interesting...

Update sooooon!

Aww... Jiah... How I do love the little lightning spark.

SADNESSIFIED! WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME? GACH! SO AWESOME THOUGH!

I hate you for making it impossible for me to hate you by writing this stuff.

Still. Epic chapter. Epically SAD chapter.

Your sad twin across the pond

Alice

Cliffhanger! Great chapter!