Reviews for Chocolate
Dream I Dare 2/18/13 . chapter 3
please when it's adopted please write another post
Lizscissomcullen 5/15/12 . chapter 3
No u can't stop with chocolate I need to know who told them the other had died and y please give this one one more chance.
LunaticDriver 5/14/12 . chapter 2
I want to kill her. I cry wen i read the last paragraph please update!
angieluvzdecullens 5/14/12 . chapter 3
Omg I'm sad to see that inspiration has left don't worry I totally understand sometimes it happens and characters stop talking to us :) yhu need a break and hey its cool as I sai before I'm sad to see these stories go but hope 2 see yhu back someday

_ Angie
EdwardBellaRenesmeCullen 4/25/12 . chapter 2
WHY THE HELL YOU NAME THEIR DAUGHTER BOY NAME. DO YOU WANT THEIR DAUGHTER BE HALF BOY AND HALF GIRL. YOU SHOULD NAME THEIR DAUGHTER NAME CARLIE. GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR STORY I DON'T WANT TO TURN TO NUT. IS WAS WEIRD TO READ STORY THAT GIRL HAVE BOY NAME WHEN THEIR ALOT CUTE GIRL NAME YOU CAN CHOICE FOR THEIR DAUGHTER. BUT NO YOU CHOICE UGLY BOY NAME FOR THEIR DAUGHTER.
lilmstran 4/13/12 . chapter 2
loved it

keep going

can't wait to read the next chapter
ANGEL FALLEN FROM HEAVEN 3/25/12 . chapter 2
omg can i kill tanya? cuz i soooooooooo want to kill her charlie is not her daughter and she never will be her daughter she is bella's daughter

ily!

xD!
Veronique24 3/24/12 . chapter 2
Didn't see her coming along for the ride...

Can't wait to read how hopefully Bella places Tanya in her place!
x0xalexis8 3/24/12 . chapter 2
i cant wait to find out whats going on!
AllisonteamEmmett 3/24/12 . chapter 2
Really good. Update asap!
angieluvzdecullens 3/24/12 . chapter 2
Aww charlie is the sweetest argh stupid Tanya I hate her sooo muuuucchh yhu have no idea how mmuch I hate th bitch like not joke...update soon :) luvin the story
crazy-chick-4life 3/24/12 . chapter 2
Oooooo hell no me dont like tanya I want to kill the person who made the lie I feel it was charlie,renee and tanya I mean u could have it where her parents didn't want her to give up college and life so they thought that it be better this way so they went to tanya knowing she could get edward not to be able to get there in time and have bella nurse be tanya mom and like have her black mail the doctor 4 something that would take his license away love your story cant wait 4 more
deathnoteuser07 3/24/12 . chapter 2
for some reason tanya is always the villain. nice story, i like it. very interesting, full of mystery. i wonder who lied to bella and edward but i'm guessing it's tanya.

review my story please?
l1lyk0 3/23/12 . chapter 1
This is a great idea for a story! Please continue!
ANGEL FALLEN FROM HEAVEN 3/4/12 . chapter 1
who would want to do that to anyone that is sooooooooooo cruel on many levels

ily!

xD!
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