Where did you go?

Darling when will you update again? Please?

Please come back soon!

I'm 100% scared to read this story's upcoming updates because of stupid Loose Ends and everything (i'm just assuming that Loose Ends will be in this story)
Anyway continue updating even though my heart will permanently break once LE comes. :D

Amazing female character
she's not mary-sueish but not a total boring character either
but don't make ghost just fall in love with her either...love takes time
also i recommend you work on some parts. like some of the dialogue. i've run into few parts where i don't which character is saying what. or maybe it's just me. heh
anyway
update
and excuse me for the totally lazy grammar and crappy review
i'm lazy

Omg I can't have an account but please please please update I really love this story! I don't keep many in my reading list but this has stayed for a long time! KEEP WRITING!

Love the fact she is undercover cia :)

Love it!

from reqding the end of chapter 1 (since u changed it) i dont like where its going i liked it better before constructive critism tho :D keep writing!

this story is amazing, mettre à jour (update!)

Good, so far, this story has lots of potential, but I must admit that Shadow suddenly getting Ghost's attention was sort of thrown out there. Maybe in future chapters you can cover that up by actually having Ghost's and Shadow's relationship progress by different levels.
Other than that, keep writing!
-Victory

I never played MW2, but I'm guessing that the whole Alex the Red is part of the campaign because I saw his name being used in a different fanfic. I really like this one so far :)

Great story hope the next chapter is coming soon

Great first chapter! Following and favoriting! I am new to COD, and love your story so far! Do you have any Black Ops Two fanfictions?

Just wondering when you are going to finish this story, since you do a pretty good job telling the story in first person.