 Mastero 8/30/02 . chapter 1Bice fic, but isn't Vandemon one of the evil guys? |
 Athena1999 6/11/02 . chapter 1This is great! I love tear-jerkers... and I'd be good playing Shinji's part... sounds like a MyoAthena angsty romance to me... good work! |
 Renn Ireigh 9/2/01 . chapter 1...sad...good... Not many stories almost make me cry. It's only the excellent ones. Even though I'm not a fan of self-insertion or original characters, this is one of the ones that has me struggling not to cry. |
 a reviuwer 9/27/00 . chapter 1 WHY did you kill off two fantastic characters BRING THEM BACK! |
 Sidra Astro 9/23/00 . chapter 1 That was depressing but well Shinji and Vandemon, keep writing. |