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SErinS
2008-07-18
ch 11,
abuseI'm not a fan of I/M but I also don't like Maria do if her feelings get hurt I don't care.
As or Max and Liz I don't think Liz should go right back to Max just because she is the real queen and that they belong together.
Liz should make Max fight to get her back(if you plan to get them back together).Pretty good story though keep going.
Callista Wolfwood
2008-03-13
ch 10,
abuseupdate!!
sleepy26
2008-03-10
ch 10,
abuseinteresting story can' wait to see how it progresses
Magali
2008-03-09
ch 10,
abuseSiara can keep Michael. He will cheat on her like he cheated on Maria with Isabel and cheated on Isabel with Maria, since Isabel was his destiny. Cheating is in his blood, anyway. And who would want a guy who says "I love you" to one girl and be attracted/sleeping with any girl crossing his path?

Now, Liz, she disappoints me. When Tess was around, Maria was the best friend to her, and she didn't side with the enemy. Liz was her friend and she wasn't going to befriend Tess. But Liz? She does it without a problem. Nice, real nice.
insidious heart
2007-07-01
ch 1,
abuseNo offense but it would be nice if you could leave some kind of hint/warning in your summary that there are going to be UC pairings in your story.
Callista Wolfwood
2007-06-30
ch 9,
abuseupdate!
Magali
2007-06-29
ch 9,
abuseOuah, let me get this straight. Michael cheats on Maria with Isabel, the new girl steals Maria's best friend AND the guy Maria loves. Is there an end to Maria's misery ? Because right now, it looks like she is surrounded by backstabbers who don't deserve her and could rot in hell for all I care.
Callista Wolfwood
2007-06-26
ch 8,
abuseupdate! update!
Magali
2007-03-20
ch 8,
abuseThis story is confusing, I am having troubles understanding who are the good guy and the bad guys. And the Michael-isabel thing ? Can I throw up too ? I don't see how Maria would take him back, if they were together at that time.
Grace52373
2005-03-17
ch 6, anon.
abuseHold on? I don't know if I can. The thought of Michael and Isabel makes me want to vomit more than Max and Tess! At this point, I don't even want to think about Maria taking Michael back after the way he treated her. I never understood the attraction to Michael and Isabel. No offense, but they are so closed off, that I think they would make a lousy couple, just like in their previous life. They need Maria and Alex to make them likable in my eyes, because Maria and Alex open them up emotionally. This whole destiny always seemed contrived and cold to me. I always thought that Maria brought Michael to life, and made him feel connected to this world, and many times she made him feel like he wasn't alone. Granted, he was a lousy boyfriend at times, and I always liked the fact that Maria tried to bring out the best in him, like Alex did with Isabel. In the end they both succeded! I know that Maria complained about Michael, and wanted him to be more romantic, but in the end, she realized that she loved him anyway. I'll try to stick with this story, but I have a hard time with stories that pair the pod squad up with each other.
Grace52373
2005-01-26
ch 5,
abuseI love your story, but I am a 100% Michael and Maria fan, so if Michael is going to be with Isabel, I won't read it. I assure you that it is nothing personal, I just don't like Michael/Isabel and Max/Tess stories! Here is my e-mail: HyJnnJen@, if you could let me know if your story is a unconventional or conventional couples story.
Grace
xemmax
2005-01-05
ch 4, anon.
abusethis is soo confusing! i hope you update and make sense soon.

max+liz
sleepy26
2005-01-03
ch 4,
abuseinteresting story
HannahC
2004-12-31
ch 3,
abuseI love it! Are you still writing for it?
Thank you for the reviews you sent!
wrong!
2004-06-16
ch 6, anon.
abuseim sorry, but this story is just not working for me, its stupid and it makes no sence! and frankly its ** me off, for example, why would Liz just be friends with Max? when all Max cares about is his fuken destney with tess? i dont know about you but if it was me i would ignore the bastard! and Maria, if it was me and my bf fuked another girl, then lets just say she wouldn't be having her next birthday as for my bf too! but the immotions are just not there for me! and its really pourly written...i think that is a understatment though! but hey! just telling you what i think, before you flame me.
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