Awww! I love this! This should have happened in "Skin Deep"!

Nice twist of the story :) I like it

Now That's what should have happened in Skin Deep! :)

You are by far the best Rumbelle writer I have come accross yet. Here's hoping each new episode inspires you to write more! :)

I really like the idea of her breaking the "curse" but not taking away the magic. That's how I see it happening too. The curse and the power being separate. Great job!

aww i want this to have happened! poor rumpel. great fic :)

Perfect! *.*

That's was just great! I wish everything had happened like this... The story would be so much easier xD

Loved the way you portraited them! Congrats, dearie, nice one!

Great story!

I enjoyed this. Nicely done.

I've read this one a few times. It really hits on the darkness and the anger, but that makes the ending that much more rewarding.

"She was the queen's creature in all ways; both women could make their pretty lies sound so very much like truth."-And since we know that Belle has not yet really told any lies and how much Regina does lie, you bringing up the subject of how very hard it can be for anyone to distinguish truth from a lie is almost terrifying.

Ha ha, always thought in that dungeon scene she should have tried, well, not this, but at least another kiss to force him to believe.

I love how you write them kissing. It will be so much fun to watch in Season 2 if he'll just forget himself and do it one day or if she'll have to start showing frustration.

And you know the real story of Sleeping Beauty! I sense a kindred spirit fairytale-wise!

And there was no better way to end it. Very sweet.

lovely this is

See now THIS should have been how that episode ended... granted it would have had to been on HBO instead ABC. Regardless, LOVED IT!

Chupip

Great, great, GREAT.

I really enjoyed your story. It was hot and seductive, and I love where you took the characters. Who says you can't have it all.

Wonderful! I loved it!