This is very beautifully written. You're doing a great job with the AIA bits. I'm wondering if you're going to write more?

I don't know which was more painful reading, Hazel or Augustus. Good writing, just painful.

I didn't realize you had plans to continue this as a multi-chapter story, but I'm glad. You've continued to do a great job with drawing these parallels. They're emotional without seeming contrived.

I have just currently finished re-reading "The Fault in Our Stars" and I thought that it would be a great idea to read fanfictions of the book and I really love this so much!

Oh, and I do hope that the movie comes out soon!

Update soon

jfslkd;jfs I am a mess. This archive, this story. ALL OF YOU ARE CAUSING ME EMOTIONAL PAIN! AND I LOVE IT! Nope! There's nothing wrong with me! Ok. I'm ok. Yeah...Not...I'm gonna curl up into a ball and cry...

Oh, wow, that is very well written!

The flow from Isaac to Augustus and then to Mr. Lancaster is seamlessly perfect. And the AIA parts are exactly how I imagine it would be, had the book not been fictitious.

Wonderful job :)

Oh, how painfully sad, but written very well.

I really like how you connected dots between "bits from AIA" to Isaac, Augustus, and Hazel. That was very clever and effective.