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sexylyon
2009-07-24 . chapter 9
*grin*

i'm still around... and thank you! i love this story tons too.
mystiri1
2009-07-24 . chapter 9
I realise that, given it's been so long since the last update, you've probably left the fandom or moved onto other things, but if you're still around to get this then I just thought I'd let you know that I think this is an awesome story. I really enjoyed reading it.
Lichan
2009-07-17 . chapter 9
I couldn't remember why I still had a bookmark of a fic that hadn't been updated since 02. After rereading it I damn well know why. It's one of the most well written pieces of fanfiction I've read in years.

Your characterization, and the way you pull emotions out of those characters is breath taking. I hope whatever your doing now. You are still writing something. Even if you no longer want it to be this. You do have a gift it shouldn't be wasted.
SofaLeonhart
2009-07-09 . chapter 9
I just read up til this point, and I can't believe it's been halted!

It is a fantastic story, with so much depth to it.

I really hope you can find a way to continue, because it's utterly great.
Vedensolina
2009-02-04 . chapter 9
I love this story, since for once somebody writes Seifer character just the way I think he should be.Also, the fact that there even hasn't been any interaction between Seifer and Squall and you still get the feeling that there is a lot going on between them, shows how well this is written.Specially this newest chapter, though I really liked that scene where Squall and Irvine had their talk.
clipped.amaryllis.
2008-09-06 . chapter 9
Thank you for sharing this. I was expecting a run of the mill SeiferxSquall, and was blown away. There's a depth to your writing that I don't come across too often (I really don't remember the last time I've come across it actually), and I just can't help but feel something nice from having read it (are you a professional writer?)... The scene with Squall and Irvine was intense, and the one with Seifer and Irvine almost broke my heart again...
I'm guessing this is going to be discontinued, or updated very haphazardly (I went to your homepage, and understand you'll update when you will, if you want.) Chapter ten was lovely, and the snippets of 11 and 12 kept me intrigued. If you continue this, well, I'll be back. If you don't, I'm just happy you posted as much as you did.
jenepeuxpaslecroire
2008-07-31 . chapter 1
Okay, wow, full circle. I just reviewed, but I didn't look at the author name until after I submitted my review, so I hadn't even realized it was YOU who wrote this! I am a huge fan of your work Interlude and Relativity, so I was floored when I realized you also wrote this. This story is absolutely insanely good, as all your work is.
jenepeuxpaslecroire
2008-07-31 . chapter 9
Damn! This story has me hooked.
alescA Munroe
2008-01-09 . chapter 8
*is relieved to have found your homepage* For a very depressing moment there, I thought I wouldn't see another chapter for this fic. Beautifully written, great characterizations. The Seifer and Irvine interaction has got to be my favorite, I have this massive thing for their interaction written well, and you are awesome and win in that department. Your Zell and Fuujin bit in this chapter earns props, too.

*pokes at homepage* Is chapter 12 the last one?
shoeterfly
2007-11-03 . chapter 1
I feel I must grovel on my knees if that is what it takes for you to continue your story. This is exceedingly well written and very enjoyable for me as a reader. I am concerned about Squall even though his mental plight was somewhat explained. I adore your writing style. Please continue.
shoe
Velveteenrabbit
2007-08-02 . chapter 1
Wow. haha, I'm not very good with words, but you are Awesome writing. you portray the characters so well. The part w/ Zell and Fujin floored me XD

Are you still working on this fic? If you are, please update it
alescA Munroe
2007-01-03 . chapter 9
I'm floored. The way you write these characters is amazing, how much Irvine and Seifer see, just the way you've written Squall, it's beyond words. Update soon.
Malynm
2006-06-16 . chapter 9
gawd... I just bawled my eyes out...what a fool I am... but seriously, you writing is addictive.. this is very possibly one of the best stories I have ever read - and I am so disappointed that you no longer update... please please please.. i will pay you to update!! i will beg! anything! PLEASE
~Mally
Althea17
2006-04-20 . chapter 9
Ok. I'm VERY confused. Who is the main couple?! First I read the summary and thought, "Oh good. Another SeiferXSquall." Then I read and rethought, "Ok. Love triangle with Irvine involved." And THEN I thought, "OK...so maybe the love triangle's a REALLY deep triangle." So yeah. CONFUSION! You must update soon and end this confusion!!
elf grrl
2006-02-23 . chapter 9
ohh, no!! i love you and i h8 you for this story, is that even possible? Please, plz update soon or im likly to go mental myself!
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